Reviews for It was a great idea |
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daphnegray78 chapter 1 . 4/10/2004 I'm glad she decided not to marry the prince at the end. *Sniff* I was kind of hoping she would end up with the trader, though. Anyways, awesome story. It had an interesting plot line. Great work :o) |
Natalie Elyse chapter 1 . 3/14/2004 Aw, what a nice story! Your writing is very smooth and you have a good writing voice. The ending is very poetic - it made me smile. : ) |
I am Gone chapter 1 . 9/10/2003 That was a cute story. |
HarmonyIsarine chapter 1 . 7/16/2003 I like this. _ I had become starved of your writing, so I had to investigate your bio. Glad I did. I agree with the other reviews: This has a wonderful plot. |
MystyTaurus chapter 1 . 2/24/2003 *Stare* NO it's not a blank odd stare, it's a.. a.. a.. Well I liked the storie even if I can't find a word! It kinda started out like Shrek (great movie hehe) but I liked the rebel thing. Great start, continue! STATISFIED STARE! (even if the spelling's wrong) |
Jaclyn chapter 1 . 10/6/2002 WOW! That was brilliantly written and plotted. I'm *really* impressed! (And thanks for reviewing my poem, by the way)! |
Cobby chapter 1 . 9/25/2002 Aaaah, that was great, short, and it said it all. Wonderful written, with just enough detail to make it interesting, and not to many to make it annoying:) |
Gowa chapter 1 . 9/13/2002 ~claps~ great story. .but perfectionists arent always perfect :' Me wear breeched? ': isnt it supposed to be breeches? ~smiles~ just kidding ya, thanks for reviewing my story -gowa |
Liller chapter 1 . 6/10/2002 very good! i like it a lot. i didn't actually see the metaphor until the end. you could make this a novel of sorts you know. you just need to add detail and specifics. it would make a pretty good plot. it's very good the way it is though. |