Reviews for It was a great idea
daphnegray78 chapter 1 . 4/10/2004
I'm glad she decided not to marry the prince at the end. *Sniff* I was kind of hoping she would end up with the trader, though. Anyways, awesome story. It had an interesting plot line. Great work :o)
Natalie Elyse chapter 1 . 3/14/2004
Aw, what a nice story! Your writing is very smooth and you have a good writing voice. The ending is very poetic - it made me smile. : )
I am Gone chapter 1 . 9/10/2003
That was a cute story.
HarmonyIsarine chapter 1 . 7/16/2003
I like this. _ I had become starved of your writing, so I had to investigate your bio. Glad I did. I agree with the other reviews: This has a wonderful plot.
MystyTaurus chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
*Stare* NO it's not a blank odd stare, it's a.. a.. a.. Well I liked the storie even if I can't find a word! It kinda started out like Shrek (great movie hehe) but I liked the rebel thing. Great start, continue!

STATISFIED STARE! (even if the spelling's wrong)
Jaclyn chapter 1 . 10/6/2002
WOW! That was brilliantly written and plotted. I'm *really* impressed! (And thanks for reviewing my poem, by the way)!
Cobby chapter 1 . 9/25/2002
Aaaah, that was great, short, and it said it all. Wonderful written, with just enough detail to make it interesting, and not to many to make it annoying:)
Gowa chapter 1 . 9/13/2002
~claps~ great story. .but perfectionists arent always perfect :' Me wear breeched? ': isnt it supposed to be breeches? ~smiles~ just kidding ya, thanks for reviewing my story

-gowa
Liller chapter 1 . 6/10/2002
very good! i like it a lot. i didn't actually see the metaphor until the end. you could make this a novel of sorts you know. you just need to add detail and specifics. it would make a pretty good plot. it's very good the way it is though.