Reviews for Priceless |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I still love this story of yours... i've probably read it at least 5 times...but everytime it makes me 's like those books you keep on the shelf, and suddenly u remember them and get that urge to just read it... |
![]() ![]() you maje blank seem like he doesnt have character, like a little puppy, i dont like ur story sorry, |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very dramatic and sweet though crazy it's own way. Sheesh so much death and heartache, but in the end she turned out a good girl and I'm SO happy Blank/Ashton came back to her, and they're in love, he's healthy, and they're finally really together, congrats to their future babies YAY, I would love to read a sequel but I'm not holding my breath, take care and keep writing good stuff like this. |
![]() ![]() aw thats a cute ending i loved ur story it made me cry when carly and vance didnt like her that chap was soo soo emotional and so many people died lol i rekon the moms death was the saddest... i thote blank was gunna die too in surgury my tissue box would've been empty if that hapened ur a really good writer and i think u deserve more reviews... is there a sequel to this? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm... Well, that put me in a sombre mood. It was really... dark. I went directly from reading a happy (REALLY happy) story to reading this, and I just felt so much more... calm, if you will. It was pretty depressing at the beginning, and i think i skipped a few parts, partly because the page wouldn't load right, and because i didn't have much time to read all of it. I wanted to get it finished tonight. So now it's almost 12, and I just finished. Man, am I glad you ended this happily, though. That'll get me some sleep :D. I would've been kind of upset if it was NOT a happy ending. Not that I'm CRAZY for happy endings, or anything, but i wanted this story to be happy. I'm all about happy right now, aren't i? Anywho... good job on this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well...short chapter O_O lol, how 'bout i clickie again? |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, is this the reason the dance changes everything? justin doesnt ask her? oh i just dont know, im shit at predicting things; must click next chappie to find out. *clicks* |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol, her self-absorbance makes me laugh...wait, is that even a word? :S anyhow, ahem, yes, she makes me chuckle, in that 'god you're so vain its funny' kinda way that i'm sure you were aiming for (though, yes, i do realise the point of the complete arrogance is that she'll no doubt be changed by whoever/whatever comes about at, the dance, is it?) anyhow, tis good; i continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i likies. in fact, i remember i started reading this, hmm, must've been at least a year or so back, maybe even two? (jesus, that's a long time.)and i remember liking it then, so i'm not quite sure why i didn't carry on; knowing me, it was probably for a really pathetic reason like getting annoyed with the 'â's. anyhow, yeah, im sure you really dont care about all that *embarrassed laugh* onto the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was amazing. You have real talent. I love it! Any chance of a sequal? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was about to read this, but it looks like something messed up the text. Every ' has turned into a whole bunch of weird symbols... you might want to try reloading it, because it's hard to read. Just look for yourself. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES! fantabulous! i love it i love it i love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start, good detail (ie about her family) but she's sounds so arrogant? I'd like to see if this changes. By the way, whats with the funny symbols (â)? I know they may not be your fault, but if you know how to get rid of them please do. They distracted me a bit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! I finally got to read this. I've been so busy and I just recently came back from vacation. I love your ending. It's sad that it's over, but it ended well. I don't blame Hayden for being angry at her father. He shouldn't have left his family for a week, even though he was upset about his wife's death. He didn't seem to grasp that he wasn't the only one grieving. Anyway, I loved this story. Well done, from finish to end. Keep up the excellent work! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aie! Okay, so I'm a bit late. But I love happy endings! Especially if they take place after every sad chapters. Great fic, this one. I shall miss it. Hugs! Cheers! All that good stuff. Off to fawn over your other stories. Tah-tah. |