*whistles slowly* I like her! Beautifully done, and the suspense was perfect. Not overdone at all. Fearfully lovely.

No, this is a standalone, not part of a series.

On another note, I only just realized I was blocking anyone who wasn't signed in from reviewing! No wonder I have so few reviews. I just fixed that.

Was this part of the Warrior Convention stories? Okay, that was a questions, not a review, but I've already reviewed this one before, so there.

Not bad, I'd would've had wrote the death part a little longer but overall very good!

This definately shows great potential. Good characterization and great descriptive ability paint a nice picture for the reader. The author's skill has already has surpassed

many "professionals" in the world of speculative fiction.

I like this one. I like how, even though it's short, it gives you a distinct idea of their life styles and an all around very good impression of the characters. Black Iris is a bad-ass chick. *grins*