Hi Tor,

Liked this story. Lots of action, well described. Especially liked the breaking up of the support boards and her solutions to that problem. (notice I assume Rasa is a girl's name.)

I also like your humor, especially the garlic in the sandwich.

Write another one. You are older now and probably will write differently, but keep the love of action and humor and don't criticize and edit yourself too much. Just write. The more you write, the more you will notice things you want to do differently.

Keep up the imagination!

Rae

hee hee hee...u funny...hee hee...

arg

you run, i chase, just like always (no one said anything about catching) :) hee.

Funfunfunfunfunfunfun!

Heeheeheehee...

Ciao!