Reviews for Glitch
Reoka chapter 21 . 1/20/2013
This story (so far) has been absolutely Wonderful! It's such a shame that it's been so many years since an update! This is probably a pointless review, but I just had to say how much I have loved reading this.
Sugar B chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
Akira and Flair

My name is Ricky.

I read this story... god, years ago now. I was living in a town called Maffra, and I moved away from there when I was fourteen in 2004... it was so long ago.

This story was the first time I escaped from... an incredible pain. I thought I was completely alone in the world and had nothing left, then I read this and it changed all that. At first I felt accepted, like there was someone else out there who might understand me. Then suddenly it ended, unfinished, and my heart broke. I have to thank you, so deeply, for that heartbreak.

Because of that I picked up a pen (proverbially). I couldn't let it stay unfinished; so I wrote my own version. I completed it on Friday the 13th of July 2006... I'm about to re-write it with everything I learned at University applied to it.

Thank you. Thank you SO much. You single-handedly changed my life and gave me something to believe in. You gave me a purpose that I have managed to cling to and thrive from. Because you wrote this... because you never finished it, my life has a meaning. I think about this story so often. I think about Takeshi and Kael and the hope their fictional lives gave me...

I know I'm gushing, but I honestly can't describe in words (even with my relative mastery of them) how much gratitude I feel toward you. From the bottom of my heart I thank you, I respect you, and I truly hope that one day this marvelous piece of work gets to see the light of day again. Perhaps one day you'll find a spark within you that urges you to write this over; I know it's unlikely. I too have many works that will remain unfinished and gathering dust 'til I've long since become no more than just that; dust. However, I hope you'll at least consider it. Personally, it would mean the world to me, and perhaps there's another young lost soul who will find the story and feel the same hope I did.

Do you know how greatly you've affected me?

I lived. I survived through so many things because of the hope that came from my writing. All of it started here...

I know I'm gushing. My apologies.

I also know you'll probably never read this. You're probably long gone and will never come back to fictionpress. But if by some miracle you see this, please contact me.

My email address is

Once more. Thank you.

Thank you for everything.

Yours Sincerely,

brookeworm chapter 21 . 3/8/2011
I loved this storry, but it made me sad that it hasn't been updated in 7 years! *sob* You really should pick this one up, its amazing, I love it so much. Kael and Takeshi are the cutest couple in the world.
Here's to you Akira and Flair chapter 21 . 2/25/2009
...It's so hard to believe that I read this five years ago.

...Even harder to believe you stopped writing it six years ago.

I spoke to you once.

But I never got the chance to say what I'm going to say now. This book...this incomplete masterpiece, is the reason I write today. I'm reading it now, and feeling this beautiful, powerful nostalgia. It's sad, and heavy, and cold, but beautiful all at once.

Because of this book, I wrote my own novel. I was inspired by this feeling. My love for Glitch flowed into my own writing, and filled me...and I finished it. I had to. I had to inspire someone, the way you inspired me, and I had to give them the ending I never had.

I'm not mad that you didn't finish it...I'm not glad, either, but I love what it's given me. I want to thank Thank you. Really. Just by writing this you've contributed a massive fulfilment to my life. I know you'll never read this; you're long gone now, but this is something I just had to say.

So here's to you, wherever you are. Whoever you are.

My nameless, ageless, incomplete hero.

Thank you.



P.S., If, by some miracle, you do read this...please try to contact me. This is my old email address, but I check it every now and then. .

Thank you.
leemya chapter 21 . 9/24/2007
Great story!

Please continue writing!
Pyrocide chapter 21 . 8/20/2007
I'm so in love with this story.. though i can't help feel sorry for Tybalt and I wish Nary was different.. *grumbles*
firestar267 chapter 1 . 10/2/2006
Me likes! I only have time to resad this chapter at the moment but i will deifnately read more, really well written and a great story line - well done and please keep it up!
Green Eyed Pixie chapter 21 . 10/2/2006
You can't just leave the story there! You can't leave poor Tybalt and Nary not together! Or Ethan and Devoin only meeting once! You can't leave Takeshi and Keal NOT going at it like bunnies! I'm begging you to update this story again, please! I'll take anything! Seriously I'm such a Glitch whore. If not for me then update for Tybalt and Nary! They belong together! ]
Benji's VIP chapter 11 . 9/5/2006
I'm enjoying this so far.I love the interaction between Kael and Taky. ]

Para Noya chapter 21 . 8/12/2006
(whimpers, falls to knees) I WORSHIP YOU! This is such a fantastic story, you are the GODS of writing! I AM NOT WORTHY!

(coughs) Now that that little episode is over, you're story is, simply put, riveting. I couldn't even tear myself away from the computer until I had finished it. And now that I have...


Please please please PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

*Para Noya*
Yaoi boy chapter 21 . 8/12/2006
Please update soon. I'm begging you. I need more Glitch!
Yaoi boy chapter 15 . 8/4/2006
Did they do it or not? If they did then shame! You should put their first time in more detail! More then Tybalt and nary's one! But still, I love this!
Yaoi boy chapter 8 . 8/2/2006
Oh my god, whatever happens, please let their smutt continue. At least in another chapter if not the next one. Please!
Yaoi boy chapter 2 . 8/1/2006
This is nice, this is nice!... and hot!
Yaoi boy chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
Amazingly cute! I'm quickly starting on the rest but if it stays like this then it is great!
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