WOW i love, i adore, i cant believe i read all this in a day, n i want more dammit! *squee* takeshi n kael, ethan n devoin, tybalt n the new guy, anarchy and.. sum1.. yea.. well, i love this n i reeli hope u update pretty damn quickly.. _ cz this rocks!

This is, was really, really good. It's a pity that, judging by the update date this is over.

I thought of something else just as I pushed the submit button on the other review... Aren't Lairds scottish, not Irish? Cute chappy, btw

Ok... I'm going to read further, but I must place my comments here before I off, I really like the story. It's funny, cute, fluffy... Everything I like. However, the devil is in the details and I have a few alebiet minor off, although your French is for the most part of far better quality than most stuff I see here (thank the goddess), there is no way that you could spell Kael's last name like that and have it come out sounding how it was spelled phonetically (Tay-eh-sih-day) here. The sound AY in French can be spelled about half a dozen different ways, but the letter A on its own is always pronounced AH. The É is always pronounced AY. The sound EH would be written either È, Ê or Ë. The si would be pronounced SEE. The French unfortunately have no IH sound (I know because that's a sound in my own name and my dads family can't pronounce it worth shit). The phonetic result would be Tah-ay-see-day. I like it. It sounds like "tes idées".Also, the "vous" form is either a plural or a formal singular. It would be very surprising that Kael would use it on a lover. Its more something that you use when addressing someone older and not directly related to you or someone in a position of authority.I sound like a bitchy French teacher... Sorry. Truely, the French you guys are using is way, way better than some I've seen used here and even in some published novels... And your story rocks.

argh! I hate chu! updat! update! stupidheads! *pouts*

Update?

You are cruel? It's been what 2 years? This is one of the first yaoi stories I've ever read and your not even gonna continue? Cruel I say! Please update soon!

HURRY AND FINISH THIS DAMN STORY!...please?its just so good and kale is so adorable and i want to read more about the skirt wearing black and white haired bishie!So...HURRY AND FINISH THE DAMN STORY!

Yay! Very nice!

OMG!J'adore!This story is so great, and I can't believe that I'm not going to get to read any more!*sobs*hehehe...well, at least I have some new favorite characters. Like Chiclet!I'm so much like her...not sure if that's a good thing...hahaha. Well, this story is awesome, and I wish i could read more!

*Hugs yaoi goodness* I love this story so much! I love Kael and, well, I just love everyone! With a passion! I'm going to finish reading this in study hall tomorrow, so i'll review again later!

this is ..definently interesting

...I have been waiting so long for an update... I reread the whole story and realised, I've got married and had a baby and there hasn't been even one update...Please, please write more of this. I still love it. More? Please?

This story is amazingly good. I absolutely adore it! All the characters are developing really well and the chapters are nice, long, and detailed! I especially like Takeshi, Kael and Tybalt. They are just so fun yet they can be dark at times. Wonderful story! Hurry up and update!

i like the story