I ADORE this story. Seriously, it is one of the most enjoyable that I have read in a while.
Please, please, PLEASE wright more?
...Please?

oh yeah, and i forgot to say how dissappointed i was that there was no chapter depicting kael's christmas visit with takeshi. :( it doesn't make sense to *skip* something like *that*, unless you are *evil.*

hm, just read the whole story and i like it a lot.
a few suggestions, however!
~you refer to everyone as basically the same three things throughout the story:
1. by their name
2. their major, or
3. their hair coloring
this gets old pretty fast, man. just saying.
~there is really no need to go to such great detail when describing outfits. i mean, we don't really need to know exactly what everyone's wearing all the time. [that's not to say that detail is bad - but sometimes you can give *too much* detail, and it gets boring].
~what is with all of this about ethan? i understood at the beginning when he was just a stalkerly ex-boyfriend, but now he's reappearing all the time and i just don't care about him at all!
i steadfastly defy any attempts at making me feel sympathy for him. :P
anyway, basically this is a pretty interesting story, but holy crap, i am going to die if you don't focus back on kael and takeshi. [er, you can do what you like with your story, of course-but i would enjoy more of them]
now, update away~

Yessiree, I'm back to torment you poor, poor people some more.
Ahem. *clears throat*
WHY has this not been updated since December? I mean, really... I'm not picky. Any update whatsoever on this story would be very, very, VERY appreciated. ;_;

Wow... This has to be the best story I've read on .. _ ..But... Why isn't there more? You guys should really update soon... Everything about this story was really well done, and awesome... XD Of course it would have to be, if I were to stay up until 4 in the morning reading it, which I did, which I why I'm prolly rambling... But yea, anyways, I tried going to your website but it doesn't work... ;-; ;-; You guys should fix it, cuz, yea, I wanted to see the art and stuff... Anyways, update soon! _ Tis awesome.

Wow. this is so awesome. So many twists and turns...romance around every corner, and I just plain love this story. Please update soon, kk? And have more snogging! And more Chiclet, she's cool. UPDATE!
*DB*

I absolutley love this story, please update!

XD i love this story! XDD and i love tybalt/nary, even if nary is kinda... slutty. *drop* well, excuse my poor english and please go on with the story soon! _

Woo, that was so go. This chapter was awesome! Write more! I'll wait a life time for the next chapter!"Tictac suddenly seemed inordinately interested in his sandwich,"
Hahaha, lmao, that was funny.

OMG this story is so cute. I really, really, really, truly love it. It's so, argh i can't even describe it I'll admit it's kinda wierd with their height differences it's like pictureing an elve with a hobbit ya know? Cuz ya say that Takeshi is really tall and that Kael is really short i just thought i'd express that. Oh and i wanted to know, because i'm extremely dumb and oblivious to the obvious but what does S&M mean? Cuz in the story it says Kael is a Dead S&M Bondage Slave and i know what a dead bondage slave would be but i don't know what the S&M stood for. If you could clarfy that for me i'd REALLY appreciate it. My email is thanx so much and try to update soon i want to know what happens to my fav couple

Ooh...nice job! I like! Very interesting...but not graphic enough...yet anyway? Well, great job on the first 3 chappies!
DB

I really really REALLY love this story. It's the first one I ever read on fictionpress because my friend all but threw me at it and i think it's one of the best i've ever read! Please update!

; I read this a while ago... forgot to save it as a Favorite, and have been searching for it ever since. XP It's a dand story, ne? -

Questions:
1) When is a new chapter going to be up? 0_0 *drool*
2) Why is the site not working? ;_;
3) Okay, not exactly a question, but I sent an email to the email address given... Did you get it...?
Glitch is the best! _

i really like your story... it seems, though, the more it goes along, the less focus there is on Kael and Takeshi. i kinda thought they were the main characters... but i don't mind the directions you are taking with the other characters either. i hope that Tybalt gets together with someone soon, so he isn't so irritable. and that Ethan and Devoin make a good couple.
ok.. 'nuff of my ramblins, just wanted to let ya know i like your story and can't wait to see more