Reviews for Four Days North And Miles To Go
Erilynne chapter 1 . 7/16/2002
Very nice set up, and I like the imagery alot!

Jade6 chapter 1 . 7/16/2002
WOW! I liked this one... the lines:

And ibises stalk delicate

Breakable white. Soft little

Mourning sounds the hum

Of an air conditioner rush

Of oncoming lightning

they were simply brilliant... I loved your use of language and the sort of surreal quality of this piece... it was wonderful! )