you'll find yourself... it just takes a little time

wow...that was really cool. i feel this way sometimes too. and it feels wierd.

You should end it with: 'I'm nothing but mask, one over the other' or something like that. I think it would fit better...

I love this poem! It's so short and sweet and *good*! Great job!

Very interesting piece. I can really relate to that. Might I suggest you read a poem called, Within, written by, Devine Blessings. She is so very very talented when it comes to writing. I think you might be able to relate to that poem just as I did. You might find it interesting.

Not a bad go at this style. You should definitely expand this. With a little bit of parctice and some polishing you will be great at this style. Keep up the great work. Peace.

who r u? um...a great person?

great poem (as usual), i like the whole who am I thing, i guess that's the question everybody's asking themselves, who are you really? (can u ever actually know?)

u do free verse well

This is great - I loved the "mask within a mask" concept! I think you should *so* expand this piece but you should leave the ending as it is because I thought it summed up the poem and ended everything perfectly.