|Reviews for Who am i?|
| Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 5/27/2003
you'll find yourself... it just takes a little time
| Someone Out There Cares chapter 1 . 5/13/2003
wow...that was really cool. i feel this way sometimes too. and it feels wierd.
| The Crazy Cricket chapter 1 . 10/14/2002
You should end it with: 'I'm nothing but mask, one over the other' or something like that. I think it would fit better...
I love this poem! It's so short and sweet and *good*! Great job!
| Rose Dark Thorn chapter 1 . 9/19/2002
Very interesting piece. I can really relate to that. Might I suggest you read a poem called, Within, written by, Devine Blessings. She is so very very talented when it comes to writing. I think you might be able to relate to that poem just as I did. You might find it interesting.
| TK Styles chapter 1 . 7/18/2002
Not a bad go at this style. You should definitely expand this. With a little bit of parctice and some polishing you will be great at this style. Keep up the great work. Peace.
| Daredee chapter 1 . 7/14/2002
who r u? um...a great person?
great poem (as usual), i like the whole who am I thing, i guess that's the question everybody's asking themselves, who are you really? (can u ever actually know?)
u do free verse well
| Jade6 chapter 1 . 7/13/2002
This is great - I loved the "mask within a mask" concept! I think you should *so* expand this piece but you should leave the ending as it is because I thought it summed up the poem and ended everything perfectly.