Reviews for 23 Days
carmice3 chapter 1 . 1/26/2004
I don’t know what to think. Nothing happens, the diary entries are jagged and difficult to read, and we are unable to get the big picture.
And yet, the character is rather interesting. I assume that you gave her the defects I see in her on purpose. She appears repressed, unconcerned with her own well being, stand offish, and distracted. And all in 500 words.
As long as you don't try to pass it off as a story not an exercise, it's pretty cool.