|Reviews for Trial By Fire|
| Jesse Hougnon chapter 1 . 9/24/2002
I thought that this was a very entertaining story. It kept my attention the entire time because the action never stopped. Keep it up Paul, and continue to write. you have something special going for you.
| Becky chapter 1 . 9/22/2002
I don't like it when people die. But I liked the story. I think it was well written. :-) So good job!
(I meant to say... I LOVED this story! It was like totally awesome! :-))
| Bob chapter 1 . 8/18/2002
"Note To Reader" This is a real life story of combat. This type of situation has happned before durring battle and is bound to happen again. Scary eh. Great story though
| Meissa chapter 1 . 7/16/2002
If you dont get this thing published after you finish writing it, I am! And ill tell them I wrote it too! By the way, how much $ would it take to convince you to write my term paper next year?
P.S. Chris told me to read this too! He got excited that I mentioned his name in the last review.
| Chris chapter 1 . 7/15/2002
Yeah...so...as long as everyone knows things were changed around in there. Just to make the story work a little better. But I managed to get shot in the head by a SAW that was pointed directly at my...weapons man...Jeff McCowan. How does that work? Damn you Paul. Damn you and your God Mode. I ached for days, those soldiers have no idea how to treat a dead guy. But overall, good story, interesting, great fun. A-