Reviews for Strawberry Sunday
trash can art chapter 1 . 7/3/2006
My friend and I were cruising around Fictionpress searching for ridiculously bad poetry to leave hopelessly sarcastic comments to...

...And we found yours! xD

Haha, but don't get us wrong at all. We started reading and lost the need to leave anything hopeless OR sarcastic because your first and last stanzas were just so damn bloody brilliant, (All seriousness, mate.) as was the in-between.

Toodles _;
Frore chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
Very cool. ) Shame it's Friday...
Nacilme chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
To put it short; I love it.
Quid chapter 1 . 9/19/2004
M Strawberry Sunday... But seriously that's really good. The little voices in my head are singing and they won't shut up!
Frogalog chapter 1 . 1/13/2004
this was a really great poem.
it really has a lot of meaning to me.
keep up the good work!
Banpaia Daisho chapter 1 . 10/16/2003
I like the not-so-common rhyme scheme here. The flow is good, but meter needs tweaking.
AidanMoon chapter 1 . 6/13/2003
This a a really wondeful poem, I love the way you've written this.
An Insane Video Game Nerd chapter 1 . 6/8/2003
Nice poem, hon. :-) I like it a lot.
Ayanlu chapter 1 . 8/18/2002
You type sadness in your heart, yet it becomes brilliance on paper.
SweetGrape chapter 1 . 7/17/2002
gives the effect of oddity; it's a beautiful day, but something's just nagging and it's not perfect.
saaio chapter 1 . 7/14/2002
ooooo...I like this. keep it up!