Reviews for Unknown History
Minka chapter 1 . 8/31/2002
Ok, I think I have commented on this before, haven’t I? Anyway, what do you want me to say? Well, it is an excellent introduction and portrays the characters well. *Is wondering why the guards were after the boy.* this is a perfect example of how good you can write and set the scene. 'Twas easy to form a picture in my minds eye of just what the heck was going on, which is good, allows for a more clearer story and a better flowing plot. All in all, very well done! My only problem in the bad setting out, but I believe that that is ’s fault and it does it to all stories that are not double spaced between paragraphs, so that is not your fault. Am off to read the second chapter.

Minka Rain Greenleaf.