Reviews for It Is The Fourth Of July For The Human Gods
Mopey McGhee chapter 1 . 7/18/2002
This is quite good. I am no good at poetry, except for sometimes... Anyway, I like this. Keep up the good work :)
Mistress Jakira chapter 1 . 7/16/2002
This was really interesting! I can definitely see where the inspiration from this came. _ I like the very last part-"Pretend they fashioned the sky / Of light and / Sound". It showcases that fantastical outlook on a simple and yet amazing thing-something I always love to see in poetry. o_O I also enjoy inspiration. _~ lol and I hope you live to see much more of it! Great work! ~MJ
Jade6 chapter 1 . 7/16/2002
WoW - More new poems! I struggle and struggle over my poems but your seem to come to you so easily and effortlessly! That is amazing! My favorite lines were:

Godlets outside

Pretend they fashioned the sky

Of light and


What pretty imagery! Must read the rest of your new posts! )