alright! you know what? I'm adding this to my favorites and use it for inspiracion! muahahahahahahahahah!

lol I'm gonna use these poems for later and you've made it on my favorites list! MUAHA!

(P.S. i liked the poem, can ya tell? ;))

How comes you can't talk like this?

oh yeah...people would think you were weird for never speaking a complete sentence..*laughs at himself*

I like it...I really like it..i really really- you get the idea right?

wow I gotta say this is the best of all the work I've read so far...

*sniff* I liked these when I first read them, and I still like them. My favs. are "Burn" and "Fly", but I love them all. I like the way you hinted at a hidden meaning in them...not just the obvious themes. Oh great...I'm starting to sound like Mr. Tate. I'll shut up now, but great job Chibi! :)

All four are excellent! Now, are they all formed around your feelings for one person? ;)

...Ya loved it! More! gotta go read more so Ja ne!

Um hey My names Rikku and i just wanna tell you depressing poetry is my thing and wow you ftuff is wonderful hope to hear more.

Great! Love it! You might want to read my poem, No Pain. I like the whole metaphors of fire and burning.