oh was such a good poem! - it was soo sad and it ryhmed..blegh, my poems are all..not ryhming..and they suck! hey! i found this in the classics!o..the special! hahahaha jk! KEEP WRITING!

Wow! another great poem. I love the rhyming.

::sobs:: That was excellent! You write so well, Steph! Sayonara!

that was beautiful, really deep and straight from the heart. um, that sums it up and i can't think of anything else to say. :-)

Having has the thoughts your brother had, I now see it at a diferent angle. Wonder if anyone thinks that about me? Course, I've never actually tried to act on my thoughts...thanks for the insight though. Good poem.