What was that line about marriage or coffee again? (laughs in awe) Because you're there mate. And you're so bloody good.

it's an old idea approached in a new way... so it doesn't come across as tired. I like how when reading it you really feel like you're tearing at old wounds, never really letting them heal, not liking it but being unable to stop. We've all been there. Maybe continue this?

sounds to me like this girl is depressed, is a really great poem,its so .

~*ScarletDreamer

marvelous...

marvelous...

so so dark, so intense. i love it. "everything she touches hurts...everything she touches blleds." genius, frankly. is it based on a truth? or just a notion? its brilliant, either way.

crazy, crazy, this is pretty cool in a crazy way.

you should, check out, sum of, my fics

hey, it's really interesting, well written, cool idea,,but sad,,

its bloody brilliant.

oh forgive me for the pun.

kai

Short, but i think thats part of what made this piece so good. I like it a lot, the style is diffrent than the usual, so to the point and blunt-but Im not saying that in a bad way, I think its brilliant.

And if you ever need to talk about shit, you don't know me, but email me sometime. Sometimes talking to faceless names can help. Especially those who have been through it. Take care, God bless, and don't let the blood dictate you. I learned that the hard way.

xoxo

lovely. i'm so glad to see you posting again. yup, i agree with TO, it's definitely original and ironic too. i love it. great job, as usual. the images are so beautiful yet so digusting at once. made me wince. you're immensely talented.

very lovely, well written- but it curious, curious and a little uncommon methinks- of corse, i thought the summary was metaphorical of course, but either way is good. (ps, if yuor formatting is giving yuo problems- try double spacing your work.)

TO

gruesome.

oooooh...that's all i can say. _