Reviews for The Courting of Aviahnna Rubenne
Candescence chapter 13 . 7/9/2010
Oh, I loved this story. So sweet and funny. It's really great. Good job
C.Turtle chapter 14 . 7/6/2010
Hey,

This is so good?

How did you come up with the idea of this story?

I love it, one of the best storys i have read before.

keep up the good work
WithEveryReason chapter 13 . 5/29/2010
Aw. So cute.

I probably wouldn't have slapped him.

You have to just expect boys to be stupid every now and then, it's in their nature.
WithEveryReason chapter 2 . 5/29/2010
She should kill him.

Hahaha.

Just kidding.
MistahFiction chapter 3 . 3/27/2010
hey? ok, im not even sure if youre going to reply- but id like to read that varisa story. this one is really good right now though and im really sad that you removed yuor other stories before i had a chance to read them. im sure theyre great because this story is one of the best ive read on fictionpress- and believe me, ive read a lot. ok- iim rambling... bye! write on.
Hiwiwy chapter 2 . 3/14/2010
I really like this! I love historical stories (whether correct or not) but it definitely needs a humoristic undertone, and this story sure has it :D

Your writing style is really interesting (:
kaelkitty chapter 14 . 3/6/2010
phenomenal! kudos to you! i loved it
browneyedcolly chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
:)
Bubbly Girl chapter 14 . 2/25/2010
That was so amazing! Great job

:)

Peace, Love and Happiness!

-Bubbly Girl
balloonfista chapter 14 . 2/23/2010
Oh.

very different but so good :)

Ri
browneyedcolly chapter 14 . 2/20/2010
ah cute :D
Your Execution chapter 14 . 2/3/2010
Oh my, this story is absolutly fantastic. I read it all today, and I am quite pleased with the end. I laughed until I fell of my chair that I was...perched...on a bit uncomfortably. I blame the chair. ANYway, I really like the story :D
mybeachhouse chapter 14 . 1/8/2010
Kudos! A very good and entertaining read indeed! :o)
BlankPage chapter 14 . 12/29/2009
I think she said NO! Just kidding! Gosh I loved that story, so many twists' and witty comments. For some reason I enjoy stories from the years before I walked the earth, it pulls me in. So your story was absoulutely wonderful! My favorite character is Aviah, obviosly. She likes to speak her mind and has the funniest comments ever. I also like kaden's character, he's such am egoish person. I like how it ended too! Amazing!

I have just one question for you, I thought Sondra was against girls riding horses'. Why in the end, is she riding one herself?

Continue to write!
Zoius and the Devil chapter 7 . 12/26/2009
haha! i like how the raised eyebrow was a "slight violation."

though i found this chapter a little strange. i dunno... just that you dressed Aviah like Jasmine (i expected a traditional shalwar kameez), and then threw an Indian tikah on her, and then added in all that sexism. i know this isn't supposed to be historically accurate, but why would a country that seeks to shelter and undermine its women dress them so immodestly? none of the Muslim nations that you're alluding to would do so. again, i know it's all fiction... but i still found it odd.

-zozo
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