Reviews for The Courting of Aviahnna Rubenne
Shadow chapter 1 . 8/9/2002
I LOVE this! There's a similar story I know, with

the title of "Catharine, Called Birdy", which in the main character is not so pretty, and the father is a country knight. I swear that this is just as good or even better...I think it won an award. Anyway, I'll be waiting impatiently for your next chapter!
Cinnamon chapter 1 . 8/6/2002
I love this story, and Aviah is so sarcastic, it's GREAT! Please continue with this one.
akiko chapter 1 . 7/24/2002
the story is great! I really love the way that the chick is all outwardly full of hate for everyone...but still the plot seems to be full of irony..and i like this new character...he seems to be just her match...but regardless,

please continue this story...

and thanx for the great read!
Escape Velocity chapter 1 . 7/22/2002
This is really excellent! I hope you write more soon, because it's worth the effort. It's really, really good and it's funny!
Amatsuotome chapter 1 . 7/21/2002
Well you great clod of a literarily drole insperation I must say that she has captured my heart, your Avaih. I must know who she modled after, she sounds absoutly imposible with that shield (read: emotional and social barrier) of hers up. I antisipate an answer (read: lets hope you thought of me in your character developpement process this time *I say from the some-what scarstac and downright vain outer recesses of my mind*) But once again you have done an injustice to my ego what will not be forgotten_
Jaylin chapter 1 . 7/21/2002
I luv this story and Aviahnna is a kick ass character.
Zenin chapter 1 . 7/21/2002
*Sighs raptorously*

This. Is. Brilliant! BRILLIANT!

I love her perspective (kinda the way I treat a few pig-headed excuses of homo sapiens I know).

She is absolutely brilliant...there's just no other word to describe it, really.

I especially liked the way you described the hacking old man. "Haaaack...pfttt...clkkkk..."

You've got to continue.

*Brandishes knife*

Or else...


Arikiko chapter 1 . 7/21/2002
I love this story! It's so funny. Aviah has a great sense of humor, and I really like her. The writing style is very interesting, and it works well. Keep it up!
Kenhime chapter 1 . 7/21/2002
Hahaha...that was hilarious! Write more! _ I wanna see what's going to what happen to Aviah and Cow-boy!
fae-crazed chapter 1 . 7/21/2002
I like it alright.. I don't like people who think themselves better than others.. but I suppose Aviahnna can be an exception... LOL.. the fic is hilarious so far.. keep on writing!
Blazing-moon chapter 1 . 7/21/2002
I thought I MIGHT have that problem. You get a bit of her description and none of his, because I wanted to sort of show their personalities more than their looks in the first chapter. It was intentional :) I promise you though, you'll get a better description soon!
Ilana chapter 1 . 7/20/2002
I like it so far - what do the suitor and Aviahnna look like though?
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