| Reviews for The Courting of Aviahnna Rubenne |
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  Jalla chapter 1 . 8/10/2002 Oh! I love it. I hope you really *do* update this and, of course, A Brilliant Dance. I do realize you need time to write the stories first - and live. :) But this is just to let you know when you do post the update - we'll be here to read it. |
| Shadow chapter 1 . 8/9/2002 I LOVE this! There's a similar story I know, with the title of "Catharine, Called Birdy", which in the main character is not so pretty, and the father is a country knight. I swear that this is just as good or even better...I think it won an award. Anyway, I'll be waiting impatiently for your next chapter! |
 Cinnamon chapter 1 . 8/6/2002 I love this story, and Aviah is so sarcastic, it's GREAT! Please continue with this one. |
| akiko chapter 1 . 7/24/2002 the story is great! I really love the way that the chick is all outwardly full of hate for everyone...but still the plot seems to be full of irony..and i like this new character...he seems to be just her match...but regardless, please continue this story... and thanx for the great read! |
| Escape Velocity chapter 1 . 7/22/2002 This is really excellent! I hope you write more soon, because it's worth the effort. It's really, really good and it's funny! |
| Amatsuotome chapter 1 . 7/21/2002 Well you great clod of a literarily drole insperation I must say that she has captured my heart, your Avaih. I must know who she modled after, she sounds absoutly imposible with that shield (read: emotional and social barrier) of hers up. I antisipate an answer (read: lets hope you thought of me in your character developpement process this time *I say from the some-what scarstac and downright vain outer recesses of my mind*) But once again you have done an injustice to my ego what will not be forgotten_ |
| Jaylin chapter 1 . 7/21/2002 I luv this story and Aviahnna is a kick ass character. |
| Zenin chapter 1 . 7/21/2002 *Sighs raptorously* This. Is. Brilliant! BRILLIANT! I love her perspective (kinda the way I treat a few pig-headed excuses of homo sapiens I know). She is absolutely brilliant...there's just no other word to describe it, really. I especially liked the way you described the hacking old man. "Haaaack...pfttt...clkkkk..." You've got to continue. *Brandishes knife* Or else... _ ~Zenin |
| Arikiko chapter 1 . 7/21/2002 I love this story! It's so funny. Aviah has a great sense of humor, and I really like her. The writing style is very interesting, and it works well. Keep it up! |
| Kenhime chapter 1 . 7/21/2002 Hahaha...that was hilarious! Write more! _ I wanna see what's going to what happen to Aviah and Cow-boy! |
| fae-crazed chapter 1 . 7/21/2002 I like it alright.. I don't like people who think themselves better than others.. but I suppose Aviahnna can be an exception... LOL.. the fic is hilarious so far.. keep on writing! |
| Blazing-moon chapter 1 . 7/21/2002 I thought I MIGHT have that problem. You get a bit of her description and none of his, because I wanted to sort of show their personalities more than their looks in the first chapter. It was intentional :) I promise you though, you'll get a better description soon! |
| Ilana chapter 1 . 7/20/2002 I like it so far - what do the suitor and Aviahnna look like though? |