Reviews for Two Archangels In The Beginning Of Summer
Alexis chapter 1 . 7/21/2002
After your reviewed my poem i came to check out yours (there are so many!) Though i have yet to read them all, this is my favourite. They are wonderful, i love your natural sense of imagery.

Alexis xxx
Jade6 chapter 1 . 7/21/2002
This is great! I am not sure I understand it all (it is so deep) but from what I understood... ok, I am not going to embarrass myself by trying to analyse this piece as I will probably be way off but anyway... I liked it... the lines when you were describing them:

Archangels are

As and were.

Then the shorebirds

Perched over

Gravel roof, meadow,

Brackish pond.

His face and his

Face and Roman

Nose or Slavic

Coloring shiny

With Summer

I loved those lines... I re-read them a few times just for the fun of it! Anyway, great poem! )