Reviews for Eyes
Katterree Fengari chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
Nice, very beautiful
wonky donkey chapter 1 . 5/9/2003
truly great!

flowers of velvet awesome
obsidian katana chapter 1 . 10/20/2002
wow...a great haiku! i love it! keep writing!
monsterbreaker chapter 1 . 8/10/2002
Eyes are my favourite thing to write about, you can make them so descriptive and personal. You can say so much with your eyes, with out saying anything at all. This left me breathless!

~me~ PS: Thanx for the reviews
Sun Chime chapter 1 . 7/26/2002
Excellent! Haikus convey a lot in such few words.

I liked it a lot.
Sarah6 chapter 1 . 7/25/2002
Es ist nicht schlecht, aber es wäre mir lieber, wenn du weiterschreiben würdest(oder länger, such es dir aus)

Sarah
not sure yet chapter 1 . 7/24/2002
beautiful, i love it, very powerful and short and to the point
AimzNemesis Sadistic Scorpion chapter 1 . 7/22/2002
I like this, especially the first line. ) Thanx for reviewing my 'Rage' poem, by the way. I really appreciate your comments. )
Leon Red chapter 1 . 7/22/2002
Not very deep put it has some strong points.
Curtis J. Perry chapter 1 . 7/22/2002
I'm liking the comparison... keep it up.
interlectual blonde chapter 1 . 7/21/2002
Wow... that is such a powerful poem even though it isn't very long. Thanx for reviewing my riddle.