Reviews for Schwanendreher
moonlightsonata chapter 1 . 9/22/2002
ah you know Schwanendreher. And you mentioned Kareliya. Ive been in Kareliya, at least if you are speaking of the state in the Russian Federation.

Your poetry is very dark brown and purple.

Its elaborate.

Raman
unexpected source chapter 1 . 7/25/2002
The present betrothed position is perhaps better than marriage. Here you have what is called la nature et la ve'ritre'. ha-ha! Iv'e talked to her twice, she is far from a fool. Sometimes she stelas a look at me that postively scorches me. Her face is like Rafael's Madonna.

ah lorraine, you are such an artist.
Jade6 chapter 1 . 7/23/2002
OMG! You have such a way with words and imagery! This is simply beautiful! I loved the lines:

Would the kiss of the lone poet-philosopher in that palace—

The palace of ice—

Ever leave a rose-red, or violet-red, or amaranthine

Touch, on swan’s dragon in his Karelian paradise?

Those were SO perfect! This is a wonderful poem! )
Newkirk's Heroes chapter 1 . 7/22/2002
"Eyes like blue coals or russian diamonds"

Ah. Gorgeous. You are such a talented poet!
empty account chapter 1 . 7/21/2002
Wow! I really like that poem it's so mysterious or something. Very cool.