Reviews for I'm not ok
FemaleJonas chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
that's good, very deep :)

there are a few times you wrote words without g's at the end ("endin") I understand what you meant it to sound like, but sometimes it's good to write endin' or losin'. Although I actually think the flow would've been fine in the poem WITH the g's

It's a great poem though, keep writing! :D
They Call Me Mimii chapter 1 . 12/15/2008
I connected with this so much. I've been dealin with this exact thing and all the stories about it are so WRONG they don't get the sentiment right. This poem does. Some of my poems are like this but not as good, reed if you please? :)
hipbonesssx3 chapter 1 . 6/14/2006
wow this is a great poem it really shows how I've been feeling lately now that some people are questioning my eating habits..I wish they'd leave me alone and yet i wish they'd help me..idk..just keep smiling ]
nimue webweaver chapter 1 . 2/3/2004
wow. i'm speachless
Magnificent Moi chapter 1 . 12/25/2002
mmmm...that's powerful. I really like the rhyming and it's very relatable.
Silent Dreamer chapter 1 . 10/31/2002
as long as i have ana i'll always be ok. maybe not to others but always to myself. good poem i like it