|Reviews for Yellow Tints Around The Resort|
| Meli Starlight chapter 1 . 7/29/2002
And you say you don't think you'll end up as a professional writer!
| Jade6 chapter 1 . 7/28/2002
Sweet! You have such talent... your poems flow so effortlessly (or at least that is how they read!). The lines:
Architecture that is evidence
Of previous escape
And there is a heaviness here that even
The statues bend beneath.
were my favorite! )
| waterlilypad chapter 1 . 7/26/2002
I write on napkins a lot as well. Doesn't turn out quite this long though- I run out of napkin. I applaud your apparently small handwriting or well managed use of napkin space.
I can see this in my mind's eye like I was there. You can hear it, taste it, see it and smell it. I can almost touch it, it's that tangible.
Loved: "And there is a heaviness here that even/The statues bend beneath."
| Balderdash chapter 1 . 7/23/2002
Oh this created such a beautiful picture in my mind! It is such a lovely poem.
| lacking motivation chapter 1 . 7/22/2002
i got lost at the very end
it was really good!