|Reviews for The Fate|
| Pikurusu chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
Again, I love the suspense. This story is so mysterious all the way to the end and I love it. What was that thing supposed to be? The ending was so cool and I thought it was really sad when she saw both her best friends dead. Anyway, this is awesome!
| Judge Jury Executioner chapter 1 . 6/24/2003
great story. like all of urs. lol. anyway- yeah great.
| Hawk Mage chapter 1 . 5/26/2003
Very excellent descritption. Your way of writing is very good.
| white lily chapter 1 . 9/9/2002
This was really great to read, you're very good at including detailed description in your stories.
| Charlene de Letourneau chapter 1 . 8/7/2002
It's way too fast and doesen't follow a timeline either, making it quite confusive. I've noticed the same problem in your other stories. No plot, no characters, nothing is defined. Reading your stories is like opening a page in a book and reading a scene. There are merely sketches of what a real fanfic could be like.
Please, do not take this the wrong way, I still think you have a nice and simple writing style. I'm just giving you a few pointers since you asked me to check out your stories.