Wow... that was just... wow... The wording flowed nicely, the content was beautiful, and it made you think. What else could one ask for in a poem? I think it's safe to say I loved it.

-Karen

Very nice parallels. Pretty.

An interesing contemplation of the relationship between the weather and feelings, though I'm not sure I understood any of it. :)

The sudden change in mood at the end was unexpected and amplified its effect. This is a cute poem, and I liked it.

i like how you didn't use punctuation until the end, and i liked the words you used.

It's a nice poem. Some nice connections made.. Yes Earth is between Venus and Mars.. o_0 I never saw it that way! lol.

Good job

Aww...I like this. It's simple but sweet. Good job.