hey! I really loved this story! (and the ones before it). god the suspense was killing me but it was so good. i just gotta wait to see how it ends. i know how i want it to end- but that's just me, i'm a sucker for happy endings. well i just wanted to say good job, and i can't wait for the next installment. keep writing!

have you ever thought of being a writer, like professionally, when you grow up? you would be really good- and i would buy your books!

I've been re-reading this again, and i just thought i HAD to review this particular chapter. This guy i like cut his head open today, and i had to clean the gash up, and all i could think of was Jeremiah and Timber, and how he had to clean her up. Of course, my guy friend didn't sit on the sink or get into a fight, but still, i was cleaning him up and it made me think of your story. cool beans, thought i'd share

hey

this is a good story

QUADRUPLE COOL

uh...nevermind. i must be on crack. i misread your little message. but please, please, i'm begging you, start on your sequel ASAP!

does that mean i can expect to see the sequel up tonight? i hope you post it. i really do. i hate waiting (

TOOK ME AWHILE TO READ THIS STORY, BUT IT WAS ALL WORTHWHILE. I MEAN, IT'S ABSOLUTELY GREAT! HEHE. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE SEQUEL. IN THE MEANTIME, I'M GOING TO READ YOUR OTHER STORIES.

stupid jeremiah. stupid summer. i don't think i like him anymore. he just continuously hurts timber, and i hate that. i really do. he deserves to be hurt. but does he really love her as much as he says he does? i mean, if he did, then why the hell did he date summer? he didn't sleep with her, right? cuz if he did, then timber definitely should not take him back. she should just move on. (sigh) but i still like them as a couple. they're so cute

whoa! i love this story! it's the best story i've ever read (literally). it's so very original and kinda strays away from the normal cool, dumb jock and popular cheerleader thingy. well, u know what i mean. can't wait for the sequel!

AAAAAhhhhhh! How could you end the story like that? It's like a sad, angsty type of story that ends sad. And i hate sad endings with a passion. They just tear me apart and make me wish that i could change the ending to a more happy ending. Argh. But i hope your sequel is much more happier, in the end at least. It's ok if it starts out really sad cuz i like stories like that. Just as long as it's a happy ending. Well, i better go before i start rambling. Cha cha.

I've only read the intro but it looks likes its going to be good. I'll keep reading this one.

Your story is very cool. I hope you come out with a sequal. How did Whitney die? You left us all in the dark! Was it in the car accident? I hope you get your belt, don't be nervous you're probbaly great. It was messed up how she found out like that. JayJay&Mar should have told her from the start. Anywayz I just wanna tell you your story is great and I can't wsait till Saturday.

write more soon. im kinda confused with everything.

Damn! Now you really need to update more often! That's a great twist. I wasn't expecting that at all! Post more please!

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Ok now that I have that out of my system let me start with saying I'm sorry I have not reviewed but good old Ma Bell messed up moving our DSL so I have been off line for 9 days.

As always great chapters but I do hope that you write the sequel since you totally left us hanging here.

I hope your black belt test went well.

Ok, off to look for the sequel now... hmm it's midnight I guess the sequal might have to wait for the morning.