Reviews for Leety at school v. 1: The School Shooting (1/2)
trashman chapter 1 . 4/25/2019
Probably a good thing that this has been left to the crypts for 19 years
Dark Sploosh chapter 1 . 2/16/2006
Is this a comedy/satire? If it is, then I find it quite funny, but if you're trying to be serious here...well...I needn't say anymore.
Nought chapter 1 . 2/2/2004
One, you shouldn't saw fat girl. Saw big boned or something a little nicer.
Two, I like swords but
'Wriath laughed as he chopped off someone's head with a sword.'
OKayy. That was just out of no where. I give you an F.
WarAnubimon chapter 1 . 1/27/2002
Oh man. That was very interesting please countinue
WarAnubimon chapter 1 . 1/27/2002
Oh man. That was very interesting please countinue
Christine chapter 1 . 8/17/2000
Ordinarily, I respect any author with the guts to put their work where someone can see it, and to write about a sensitive topic. However, I cannot respect this. This piece of writing boggles the mind with the insulting way it portrays every character. Teachers, "fat girls," jocks, everyone. Look, I'm actually in the process of writing a story about a school shooting myself. I don't have a problem with the core topic. But if you can't form a story/novel in a respectful manner...don't post it where people like me will tell you "this is a terrible excuse for writing". Columbine still lurks in the memories of teenagers everywhere. Don't make fun of the massacre.
iamtheunknownman chapter 1 . 7/2/2000
that was pretty stupid, and a pretty awful subject to write about, uhhh, well anyways, later, I guess, yeah, see ya..
Bright Eyes chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
Weak, horrible, disgusting, awful, end of story.
LT TRAINR chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
I know I suk