Oh I love truth or dare, it always leads to something a little steamy.

lol, keep going~ pretty pretty plz?

Short chapters and a few typos, but theidea of the story is great. I'm enjoying this..keep writing.

aww aww aww. .darnit...what happens..is it over?

Either i don't like this story, or i am in a VERY bad mood today. THis is the second time in one day i have had to give a bad review to a lesbian story.

I fully support you writing lesbian stuff. Remember that! You rule!

Now on to the story.

The first chatper was great, but this next why why? there is so many things you could have done besides though that Tim is gay thing in there!

Arggh! No more kissing, nothing!

I mean, you didn't have to have kissing in chapter 2, but

Im probably just in a bad mood and i and judging you story too harshly. Sorry.

Hey, this is pretty good so far. Hope you continue soon.

It's illegal to stop there.

hmm... interesting start. I hope you continue this soon.

well...i'm not comfortable with homosexual stuff...but i like the way you caught the emotions! and thanx for checkin' out my story and for puttin' me on your fave authors list...but this is a pretty good story!