Reviews for White Angel |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is nice, I've read your stuff and now I want to get to know you better, if you have MSN please add me you seem to be a really cool person. |
![]() ![]() *mimics* Eat me. I'll make you high. ... You're dead anyway. Just eat me. HUH? ) I'm not a big fan of drugs ;) Great stuff there though, very sarcastic poem But then .. ANGEL? A drug? ANGEL? Bah. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Umm a very good poem indeed. Try not to repeat stuff like "eat me" too often, it is clearly an attempt to build up tension and suspense but too much gets a bit annoying (especially if you're reading out loud) but overall very well done |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is very is also truthful. DarkPunk |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha drugs are great. Drug poems are better! |