|Reviews for The Naval Base Beside The Marshland|
| Curtis J. Perry chapter 1 . 7/29/2002
Again, excellent description, but a little on the choppy side of things. It's like that star trek guy making a sentence out of every word. But that's my ONLY complaint. Otherwise you're one of my fav authors, no joke. Keep writing!
| Jade6 chapter 1 . 7/29/2002
So sad... I understand why you wouldn't let anyone in the navy read it! )