Reviews for white washed
aleppine chapter 1 . 3/13/2003
i love the play of white crossed with the sounds you write about.
LadyLaura020 chapter 1 . 11/3/2002
that is so* deep i like it!

Dream Linguist chapter 1 . 8/15/2002
I've never been in a hospital overnight except when I was born of course, and this makes me never ever want to! It must have been really hard for you to walk through the hallways in such a horrible place.

A heart for your father.
tarnished oversoul chapter 1 . 8/13/2002
i don't think i have ever been so skilled at filling my readers which such a depression. good work

Curtis J. Perry chapter 1 . 8/9/2002
ohhh.. please lengthen this! This has to be one of my favourites by you. It was described just so perfectly... 'layig prone on the sheets, pale white skin blending with the sheets, bruised and battered with tubes and wires...'. Man. Sorry, you made me go hysterical.
sweety167 chapter 1 . 8/5/2002
You created an image of meaning. And convaded the emotion of the moment, making the reader feel it also. Beautiful.