Reviews for The Fallen Angel
Write Me Thrilled chapter 3 . 10/25/2003
wow what animosity that was so sad but it was great
Write Me Thrilled chapter 2 . 10/25/2003
my brother and I who are reading this together think that it has an interesting story line so far.
Willow chapter 8 . 1/3/2003
why hasnt this story gotten more reviews? fer crying out loud, im loving this story, i want you (the author) to get a home page and write and draw,and,and,and do a webcomic! hehhe. i love this story, 'specialy the gore and love mixed in! 20/10 ice sushi points (mmmmm sushi)
Guest chapter 2 . 1/3/2003
Baka - jerk, pervert, idiot
Miss XXX chapter 8 . 12/25/2002
Nice going! Please continue!
siond chapter 8 . 12/24/2002
humm still some questions, But i loved the story. i will have to read it again in its entirty, and with all the changes. no time this x-mas eve. i await the sequel.

Matane
Kwan Yin chapter 8 . 12/24/2002
_ that was so good! Great ending! hehe. Can't wait for the sequel!
cze chapter 3 . 11/30/2002
Hi.

Oh... I've read a little on noli me tangere, and now that you've explained that it means touch me not, it clears up a lot of foginess in me. I studied that in history, a little Phillipinian history. So, this is oriental if u ask me, and u have achieved that effect (luckily u have given a little 'dictionary' at the bottom). Nice work, and hope to read and hear more. Good night.

-cze-
cze chapter 2 . 11/30/2002
Hey again.

It's been a while, but hey, you've editted your story. I guess it kinda resembled the format used by one of my friends - takeru and hikari. He writes really good stories, and throws in lots of Japanese. It's kinda hard to read that the spacing is gigantic, but it's definitely worth my time.

-cze-
siond chapter 7 . 11/2/2002
if you do write a sequal i will read it. so the next chapter will be the end? unless it is an extreamly long chapter you will have to write a sequal-too many questions to answer in 1 chapter;)

matane
Kwan Yin chapter 7 . 11/2/2002
I love the story! it's great! Hope the next chapter answers all the questions I have. Like why Zebele is doing this? and when is the romance going to come in? All in all, i think this story is fantastic!
Siond chapter 3 . 8/20/2002
Humm, lots of blood (not my fav.), but since the story is good I don't mind. I do like Atlantis.

Matane
Mirotori chapter 2 . 8/15/2002
cool! lot of blood. Mind you, that isn't a bad thing. Keep writing!

SiLkY
cze chapter 1 . 8/7/2002
This isn't bad, but I get a little confused at the beginning, but got that figured out. write more soon!
BloodOfAngelsX chapter 1 . 8/1/2002
Nice plot, good sequence actions of violence but the whole thing is compact a little bit. I like how you space the other paragraphs but could you like...just a suggestion, start a new paragraph after someone speaks? Because after that it gets all weird.

DemonX