wow what animosity that was so sad but it was great

my brother and I who are reading this together think that it has an interesting story line so far.

why hasnt this story gotten more reviews? fer crying out loud, im loving this story, i want you (the author) to get a home page and write and draw,and,and,and do a webcomic! hehhe. i love this story, 'specialy the gore and love mixed in! 20/10 ice sushi points (mmmmm sushi)

Baka - jerk, pervert, idiot

Nice going! Please continue!

humm still some questions, But i loved the story. i will have to read it again in its entirty, and with all the changes. no time this x-mas eve. i await the sequel.

Matane

_ that was so good! Great ending! hehe. Can't wait for the sequel!

Hi.

Oh... I've read a little on noli me tangere, and now that you've explained that it means touch me not, it clears up a lot of foginess in me. I studied that in history, a little Phillipinian history. So, this is oriental if u ask me, and u have achieved that effect (luckily u have given a little 'dictionary' at the bottom). Nice work, and hope to read and hear more. Good night.

-cze-

Hey again.

It's been a while, but hey, you've editted your story. I guess it kinda resembled the format used by one of my friends - takeru and hikari. He writes really good stories, and throws in lots of Japanese. It's kinda hard to read that the spacing is gigantic, but it's definitely worth my time.

-cze-

if you do write a sequal i will read it. so the next chapter will be the end? unless it is an extreamly long chapter you will have to write a sequal-too many questions to answer in 1 chapter;)

matane

I love the story! it's great! Hope the next chapter answers all the questions I have. Like why Zebele is doing this? and when is the romance going to come in? All in all, i think this story is fantastic!

Humm, lots of blood (not my fav.), but since the story is good I don't mind. I do like Atlantis.

Matane

cool! lot of blood. Mind you, that isn't a bad thing. Keep writing!

SiLkY

This isn't bad, but I get a little confused at the beginning, but got that figured out. write more soon!

Nice plot, good sequence actions of violence but the whole thing is compact a little bit. I like how you space the other paragraphs but could you like...just a suggestion, start a new paragraph after someone speaks? Because after that it gets all weird.

~DemonX