Reviews for The Fallen Angel
Write Me Thrilled chapter 3 . 10/25/2003
wow what animosity that was so sad but it was great
Write Me Thrilled chapter 2 . 10/25/2003
my brother and I who are reading this together think that it has an interesting story line so far.
Willow chapter 8 . 1/3/2003
why hasnt this story gotten more reviews? fer crying out loud, im loving this story, i want you (the author) to get a home page and write and draw,and,and,and do a webcomic! hehhe. i love this story, 'specialy the gore and love mixed in! 20/10 ice sushi points (mmmmm sushi)
Guest chapter 2 . 1/3/2003
Baka - jerk, pervert, idiot
Miss XXX chapter 8 . 12/25/2002
Nice going! Please continue!
siond chapter 8 . 12/24/2002
humm still some questions, But i loved the story. i will have to read it again in its entirty, and with all the changes. no time this x-mas eve. i await the sequel.

Kwan Yin chapter 8 . 12/24/2002
_ that was so good! Great ending! hehe. Can't wait for the sequel!
cze chapter 3 . 11/30/2002

Oh... I've read a little on noli me tangere, and now that you've explained that it means touch me not, it clears up a lot of foginess in me. I studied that in history, a little Phillipinian history. So, this is oriental if u ask me, and u have achieved that effect (luckily u have given a little 'dictionary' at the bottom). Nice work, and hope to read and hear more. Good night.

cze chapter 2 . 11/30/2002
Hey again.

It's been a while, but hey, you've editted your story. I guess it kinda resembled the format used by one of my friends - takeru and hikari. He writes really good stories, and throws in lots of Japanese. It's kinda hard to read that the spacing is gigantic, but it's definitely worth my time.

siond chapter 7 . 11/2/2002
if you do write a sequal i will read it. so the next chapter will be the end? unless it is an extreamly long chapter you will have to write a sequal-too many questions to answer in 1 chapter;)

Kwan Yin chapter 7 . 11/2/2002
I love the story! it's great! Hope the next chapter answers all the questions I have. Like why Zebele is doing this? and when is the romance going to come in? All in all, i think this story is fantastic!
Siond chapter 3 . 8/20/2002
Humm, lots of blood (not my fav.), but since the story is good I don't mind. I do like Atlantis.

Mirotori chapter 2 . 8/15/2002
cool! lot of blood. Mind you, that isn't a bad thing. Keep writing!

cze chapter 1 . 8/7/2002
This isn't bad, but I get a little confused at the beginning, but got that figured out. write more soon!
BloodOfAngelsX chapter 1 . 8/1/2002
Nice plot, good sequence actions of violence but the whole thing is compact a little bit. I like how you space the other paragraphs but could you like...just a suggestion, start a new paragraph after someone speaks? Because after that it gets all weird.