Reviews for Cinderella Boy
zombiemoonbeam chapter 4 . 3/7/2010
So, I read the beginning chapter and the first chapter and became HOOKED nearly immediatly. I think you should update this as soon as you can!
I Quoth Nevermore chapter 4 . 7/17/2009
I can't wait to read more about Jack! Oh man. I'm swooning just thinking about him. Update soon!
EmmaWoodhouse88 chapter 4 . 7/16/2009
That was so funny! Poor girl though with a Mother like that! I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
TERMINATED chapter 4 . 7/16/2009
ahahaha sounds a bit like me... update soon.
I Quoth Nevermore chapter 3 . 7/13/2009
Oh, Jack. me likey. This is just too good. Love the realistic interactions, the unique characters, and the exciting plot. You are awesome. Update soon!
EmmaWoodhouse88 chapter 3 . 7/8/2009
Is that Jack from the first chapter? Also is it the person who tucked her in at the party? I can't wait for the next chapter!
Matt Stockalper chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
Intriguing! Wish I could turn the page on this one...

So is her name Evie or Genny? Did I miss something? Just a little thrown by names, that's all. Had to reread to get them down. Jasmine was clear, and it's cool not to know the narrator's name till later when it's mentioned in dialogue.

Concerning the two brothers: I can't yet distinguish the two without memorizing the names. Are they important? I suppose I will find out.

Keep up the good work. I'll be reading your stuff.
helplessly in love chapter 2 . 5/26/2009
omg i love this story line.

please update soon
EmmaWoodhouse88 chapter 2 . 5/26/2009
This seems like a cool story, I can't wait for the next chapeter... Just don't wait another 6 or 7 years to write it. :D
I Quoth Nevermore chapter 2 . 5/26/2009
Ooh, it's so good! I just love this. Haha. The little cliffhanger at the end was awesome. And I can't wait for more. How dare you not update for seven years! (Not that I read it back when it was first published. . . ) Just don't do it again, cause it's bloody brilliant now and I want more. Please?
sheepep chapter 2 . 1/13/2006
Silver Lily22 chapter 2 . 6/17/2004
Okay, this story is turning out great so far but I do think you should tell the readers who is telling the story. It's kind of hard to tell. So maybe stick to one POV per chapter and title the chapter with that person's name or put headings within the chapters to let us know when you switch and who's speaking now. Other than that, great job! Oh, but please update!
Katy Keene chapter 2 . 7/9/2003
Holy man i know this is probably really old since it's on page 33 but why didn't you write more?
elle chapter 2 . 8/25/2002
Okay, ur writing absolutly rox, I really do not think I have seen better! I mean really you totally are doing the writing thing great. Keep it up! ;)
KittyWhiskers chapter 2 . 8/8/2002
mOST iNFINITLY faBULOUS! we are quite pleased with the progressing story so far.
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