I like Josh. That is all.

It's so obvious he likes her!
This is so nice, his story so far, it makes my heart flutter, almost all good romance story does that and I have noticed and tried to make it flutter but it never works when the story isn't good so it's a sign saying your story is DEFINETELY a good romance!

randomreader

I liked it.
Since you said reveiw if I liked it. I did.

randomreader

I like the prologue. It was good and makes us keep on reading about what se did too. Keep it up!
randomreader

Oh my gosh - I read this story like 4 or 5 years ago. And I read it a couple of times after that, too - including the sequel. Anyhoo, I decided to read it again - obviously. I forgot how much I loved it! True, at some points you can tell a teen wrote it, but the storyline and the character development and all of that is just so GOOD. I LOVE it! And I find that I STILL want a Josh for myself, lol. Onto reading the sequel now...

*Heather

sounds interesting.

GREAT JOB.

Wow. I don't know why, but the end really doesn't leave me satisfied. It seems like everything was going well and then suddenly Jen decided that Josh isn't really the love of her life. Which he is. You can totally tell. Well, anyways, I know there's a sequel so I'm gonna go read that now! I'm sure something will happen to satisfy me...

~Hye

Okay, wow. I'm still reading. Despite the big test I have on the Industrial Revolution, which I have to study for, and my upcoming midterms and crap. Well. I'm liking this story. Except I think Anna's death wasn't dealt with as well as it could be. I mean, Mark wasn't nearly as sad as he could have been. But I have trouble writing about death, too. And yah. I love Josh. I once got called "Her Royal Highness" for being my spoiled little self, so I can totally relate with Jen. Heh. I'm a gonna keep reading.

~Hye

All right! My first review for this story. I realize this is a five-year-old story and all, but yeah. I enjoy reviewing. I'm liking your story very much, even though the few grammar and spelling errors nag at me (I'm a grammar/spelling Nazi.) And when there's dialogue, it's a bit confusing because sometimes you can't understand who's talking. I'm sure this critique-ing isn't valid at all right now since you're probably a lot better at writing. Anyways, I'm a gonna keep reading now. Yay!

~Hye

Wow. Just amazing. This chapter is so intense. I can literally say I was sobbing from beginning to end; wasted alot of sad to see Anna go, she seems to be a very fun , I'm off to finish the rest of the chapters! Wonderful job so far.

I liked this story until this chapter. I mean, Jennifer just lets herself get manipulated by her mother, and forced into a marriage (which, by the way, is illegal-her mother could never force her to marry the guy) to some man that she doesn't know, for what? So her mom can have multiple cars and a big house? I mean, she caves because her mom can't get more than a small house and three cars with *her* trust fund? Jennifer can't have really changed that much, if she is willing to promise the rest of her life to a stranger for some green pieces of paper. My family has money, and my mom would give every last penny up for me to be happy, not the other way around. And as for arranged marriages, what the hell is up with everyone not absolutely freaking out about that? If one of my friends came to me with the problem of not knowing whether to marry a guy they love or a guy their money-hungry mother picked for them, I would smack them for even having to ask! Then I would proceed to tell them that if they did anything but marry the guy they love, they would be an absolute moron. Well...I hear there is a sequel to this, so maybe I'll read that and hope it ends better.

OMG! AARRGGHH! I'M SO GOING TO PULL MY HAIR OUT! OMG! YOU DON'T KNOW HOW MAD I WAS WHEN THE ENDING ENDED LIKE THAT! WHY! OK WELLZ JUST MAKE SURE TO MAKE A SEQUEL OR I'LL KEEP BOTHERING YOU! AND I'M SERIOUS TOO! omg... you should make the sequel into umm... on the last minute he accepted the scholarship at california... while jen stays with that dude for about iono... 5 years... she eventually gets money from the divorce to keep her mom happy... then she decides to go to cali for a job oppurtunity as a therapist... wellz then josh goes to her for therapy lessons but the thing is he KNOWS it's her but he just wants her to realize that she's still in love with him... so while they're having their therapy lessons she sorts of experience feelings for the new and mature josh.. but of course he has to look different now right? and she has to be ignorant about the whole baseball career... cause then it's better that way and the story will work out.. yeah... i think that's good! really good! maan! i should write your sequel... but sadly i'm too lazy too... but yeah.. please make one! i really want one! please oh please! thnx! ima e-mail you just to let you know!

aright wellz ima check this story out too! haha.. i just started at this chapter just right now...

I can't believe she agreed to do what her mother wanted so easily! Her mother is so materialistic, mena and self centered! Only have one car! Jeez, it never hurt anyone to work a little! Making her daughter give up her own happiness just so she could keep her lifestyle! Sorry just had to rant about that! Your work is really good, I'm just upset with Jen' mother!