Ahh, the little "my mom's gown..." episode was a bit worrisome...but she seemed to snap out of it just fine, and go back on as if it had never happened...so i imagine that's a very good thing...

speaking of very good things... HE IS GOING TO PLAY BASEBALL! WHEE! So i figure this can go one of two ways...either the game will go insanely well and everyone will be like: Yay Josh yay. or it'll go insanely terrible, end in chaos, and leave the readers worried...so...er...maybe i'm way off. wouldn't be the first time. update soon. kudos.

I got my copy of Harry Potter #5, but I don't have time to read it because I'm busy taking summer courses.

I like this chp! Can't wait to read more! (o_o)

DUDE! He's playing again! Woop!

That's beautiful! Wonderful! And I have to say, I like Amy a hell of a lot more than I like Jen's mom. Though I can totally understand how uncomfortable things would be for her. And I love Josh! He's so sweet! And he's playing again! Woo hoo! I've come to love these characters on an almost personal level reading about them. I find myself feeling for them and rooting for them and hoping everything will turn out right. You really are a very talented writer. Update soon!

It is so amazing how you come up with different things to add into this story. If it was me, I probably wouldn't have thought of half the things you did... And I had a bad feeling Jen and Amy were going to have some sort of disagreement and I'm glad that it didn't get any worse than it did.

To even surprise me, furthermore, you had Josh enter the chapter. It was at the end, but great as well...I can't believe that he started playing again & It was all thanks to Jen and her persistence to get him to talk about why he wouldn't play baseball anymore...I'm going to enjoy the last 7 chapters of this story or around there...since i don't know if thats exactly where you want to stop...I promise to keep reviewing, and when its all over, I'm going to save this story to my computer and read it over and over and over again. Enough motivation! Please update soon again...

Much Love, Faded Soulfire

I understand what you mean...I read HP too...so sad. Thanks for posting though! Update soon!

yay! a new chapter! I love it. update soon!

yay for Josh! I liked that chapter.

I loved the chapter. It was intresting. I can't wait for more to come. For a second I thought something was wrong with Josh and not something good. I can't wait for more to come.

o. they hooked up! but I can't believe Jen said she wished that she had someone who loved her as much as Mark loved Anna! what about Josh? well, I love your story, update soon!

Ah, I hope Jen returns the 'I love you' feelings because I honestly think that she loves Josh but she is afraid to love him but she has already fallen for him and she avoids those words for her own pride. Ok. Sorry if I may have confused you. Oh, and Will is such a liar. So, he likes Christy but I wonder why he wants to hide it from the whole world. There is probably a good reason for it but I guess all I can do is wait for a new chapter and see if any of my suspicions will be confirmed.

I am so intrigued to see where you take this story. It is so marvelous and wonderful so you must keep writing and writing and writing until your fingers fall off. No, scratch that. I don't want your fingers to fall off because then you can't type but I hope that you at least can keep popping out chapters so fast. I want you to know that I appreciate these updates and I'm writing longer reviews just for that. Hope you don't mind long reviews. I know that some ppl don't like them. Anyway, I'm rambling so I'll shut up.

:)

Faded Soulfire

Muahahahaha~!

sweet...

i like jenn's bro...he's funny...he's...real

That was the sweetest but sadest ever...It had tiny tears in my eyes...But i was hoping they didn't break up...Now all Jen has to do now is say "I love you back" ok better go 4 now Meg

Hello there,

Im back i only just got back on and decided to read my stories then i find this one updated...That was the sweetest thing for josh to do...He is so sweet wish i could find my josh anyways better go meg

Cool Chapter!

Secretive Will is out and running! :)

Looking forward to your next chapter as always.