You. Are. Awesome. I just love the cliffie ending (as long as there is a sequel). This was one good story. :D

ok, so... ive read this story a LONG time ago (and the sequel as well) and it still remains as one of my favorites.

so, i do the whole "myspace" thing along with most people.

and i saw this bulletin posted

"He handed her 12 roses.11 real and 1 was said i'll love u until the last one dies."

that sounds REALLY familliar

ah shit...i hate to say this but...i really hate the ending. it's because you made them go through so much pain, so much trouble, and so much hurt, and yet they didn't end up together in the end. and now the ending feels as if it's just hanging. right there. it's like, the entire story was about how hard it was for them to get together, how hard it was for her to finally be able to say "i love you" to him, and they were so happy, and then they just HAD to break up, and then your story just ended like that. so yeah i know that's the original ending you'd planned for the story, so i will just say this. it ended a little too abruptly. if you could elaborate more...but i do like your style. i couldn't stop reading, so i finished it all in one sitting.

I don't know why but I really love this story. It is about 1am on a school night so I gotta go to bed but I amazed how captivating this tale is. Best I've read in a LONG time.

I just spent the rest of the afternoon finishing your story. once i started reading i was always eager to read the rest. u r an AMAZING writer! a lot of times i was crying a lot and then the next chapter i was laughing. you seriously should get this published. i wish i knew someone as perfect as josh! i feel as if i really know the characters and i love them all, except for jen's mom. she is the worst. i still don't understand why she would give up josh just for her mom...but i guess it does make sense. im just the type of person who feels like there has to be a happy ending, even though life isn't fair. now i'm going to start reading the sequel, and i can't wait to see what happens. keep up the great work, your story is AWESOME!

I can't believe it ended like that. The ending was really sad, but I still can't believe how horrible her mother was!

Beautiful story

T.T i LOVE the ending..no! i hate the ending...oh w8 a minute i LOVE the ending...for sure! i was so sad! T.T i never knew the ending was gonne be like this!

Great Story, update soon :)

OH DAMN THAT WAS SO WIKED! I COULDNT STOP READING TILL THE VERY END, i usually alwayz stop and review with long reviews in the middle but i couldnt bring myself 2 cuz i wanted 2 finish this so bad! I'M OFF 2 READ THE SEQUEL NOW!

soz i took so lon g 2 get back to this, i've been banned frm the comp ahem a lot hehe

this is gud lolz. i feel sorry 4 jen, shes funny lolz.

i thought ur story was excellent! of course i didnt like the ending but i hope the sequal will give the ending i want. i think this book is a lot better than some books that are published! you should be really proud of ur self!

I loved reading this story. You have no idea how I felt when I was reading each chapter. The people seem so real, I felt like I knew them. Your story is wonderful and your writing style. Now I’m going to read your sequel.

I just spent my entire afternoon reading this story. I forgot to do everything that I was supposed to do, but none of that matters to me, because this story was worth every single minute of my time.
There’s one thing I have to say about this. This story touched me in ways that I’ve never felt before. Not only did the people seem so REAL, but their personality and character was inspiring and wonderful. I wish I had a boyfriend like Josh. He’d be the perfect guy – any girl’s dream guy.
This story made me feel so happy in some parts, and in other parts, really sad and lonely. The story was really sweet, but the ending was bitter.
Kudos to you. Your writing is excellent, so never stop writing!
~ Aria