| Reviews for You're My Everything |
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  Starlight chapter 19 . 1/30/2003 Yankees all the way! |
| Ren chapter 21 . 1/29/2003 Hey! I just found this story and read all the chapters to date. I love it! Jen and Josh are really sweet! Can't wait to see an update! |
 HalfwayDemon chapter 21 . 1/29/2003 Okay. Your writing skills are good. I would recommend not using the abbreviations "u", "4", and "b4" in your writing, though. The few times I saw them, made my respect for this story drop a level. Also, I thought that the whole game of "I love you oh wait no I don't I can't or do I?" was dragged out much too long. It went on for quite a few chapters, and it became somewhat trialing and annoying to read. It got to the point that I almost stopped reading. It was pretty repetitive, and I knew what would happen. In Mark's recitation of the Mandy Moore lyrics during the funeral, please do take out the parentheses, since humans cannot pronounce a parenthesis, and it makes it look copy-pasted and stupid. Put quotes around it, too. Other than that, it was fairly good. |
| talkingbanana chapter 21 . 1/29/2003 FINALLY! not only did you FINALLY update, but Josh and Jen FINALLY got together! double . . . uh, greatness! more more more more! :) |
| Padfoot101 chapter 21 . 1/29/2003 Love it again! I am so glad that they finally got together! Anyway, great job! Please update ASAP! ~Padfoot101 |
| sapofbks2008 chapter 21 . 1/29/2003 I loved the chapter. I will wait for you to update when ever you want I like were it is going. If you loose intrest again this would be a fine ending. Add a little more about the other characters and stuff like that and all but it would be good. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. |
| Cryptic Insanity chapter 21 . 1/29/2003 Yay,an update finally!Yay! I lvoed this chapter,they finally got together,all that drama was getting odl anyway b Anywho,I hope you update soon! |
| Jess chapter 21 . 1/29/2003 Nice chp! can't wait to read more! (_) |
| passion101 chapter 21 . 1/29/2003 aw, they're finally together! That was a sweet chapter:) I almost forgot about this story and I understand about the whole not wanting to type deal, cuz I'm in the same situation. Major writer's block. |
| Alec's Girl chapter 20 . 1/22/2003 Oww wow, i am in love with this story (well, josh, really.) PLease get the next chapter out soon, please? It's been more than a month since you last updated..._ |
| ScarletDreamer chapter 2 . 1/19/2003 This was a really good chapter!keep up the awesome work! ~*ScarletDreamer |
| ScarletDreamer chapter 1 . 1/19/2003 great prologue! ~*ScarletDreamer |
| purple sea chapter 20 . 1/4/2003 This is a really good chap, can u plz get the next one out soon? |
| quotata chapter 20 . 12/28/2002 That was very sweet! |
| Padfoot101 chapter 20 . 12/23/2002 This is really awesome! Please keep going! ~Padfoot101 |