| Reviews for You're My Everything |
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   dwilivia chapter 37 . 5/20/2004 wow... i cried on the last chapter... and i don't cry easily... heck, i didn't even cry at my grandmother's funeral... (not to be mean or anything)... well, i really loved this story... *smiles* |
| Noneya chapter 2 . 5/12/2004 I don't think the way you wrote the part where Jen's mom tells her about the divorce at all! It was fine! Things like that are awkward any way and I think you wrote it well. |
| Favoritestories chapter 3 . 5/9/2004 nice story! i don't like jen very much so far, she sounds mean & spoiled :( but anyways, i guess she'll still get the guy because she is pretty and that's just the way things work. lol. anyways ~drenchedinwine |
| pissed reader chapter 1 . 4/23/2004 I'm sorry to say this would have been so much more interesting if you didint ruin the plot by putting the summary of this story into the sequal. |
| little tide chapter 34 . 4/15/2004 I'M SO HAPPY YOU DIDN'T MAKE THEM DO IT...i would've been so mad...lol I'm so happy your story's done...haha unlike some STORIES...lol... anyways im gonna keep readling |
| little tide chapter 15 . 4/13/2004 i was so sad when i found out anna died... i was about to cry...lol |
| little tide chapter 13 . 4/13/2004 *sigh* sometimes jen can be such a bitch...haha |
| little tide chapter 11 . 4/13/2004 aw...thats so sad... *tearz*... loving your story so far ) |
| little tide chapter 6 . 4/13/2004 tsk tsk tsk...that jen... haha i don't like Anna very much... but yeah i'd be like that too if someone was crushing on my b/f I like your characters, their really played out nicely ) |
| NEphrite chapter 37 . 4/2/2004 i dont get it. how can she leave him? were my eyes correct in the scrolling of this last chapter? did she REALLY leave Josh? WRITE TO ME! i DEMAND AN EXPLANATION! i dont understand |
| casey chapter 28 . 2/14/2004 My g-d you have a gift in writing. I belive you should go further with this talent and make this book into a movie someday. This chapter is so wonderful that i couldn't stop crying. Keep faith in yourself and keep up the good work. Don't doubt yourself and be proud of your work. |
| watercharmer chapter 3 . 2/2/2004 lovie it! it's great! |
| ment chapter 37 . 1/14/2004 it took me hours to read this and it was worth it! it made me laugh and cry! (still am cos the ending...::sob::) oh i have become so attached to the characters its sad LoL! i absolutely LOVE josh and i can't believe, she left!oh, well i LOVE this story and i'm gonna read the sequel, hopefully it ends happier? ;) oh and i love the idea of the roses lasting forever, it's so sweet! |
| Unbirthday chapter 37 . 1/9/2004 This is brilliant... Great job in developing complex characters, and moving the story along smoothly! D It's kind of amazing how you ended the story like this, with Jen choosing to go do her mother's bidding... did she really care for her mother that much even after knowing her mother only cares about 2 things (well really 1), which are wealth, and class? Ugh, I really wanted to punch Mrs. Berio, but, oh well. I loved this story! ) |
| Heather Malfoy chapter 37 . 1/5/2004 Hi! I have been reading this for the past few days, and I was SO hooked to it...And as a loyal fan of yours, I'm going to give you my honest opinions, good and bad. If I, or many other people, had been in Jen's place, I would have said "Screw you," to my mom and ran off with Josh. That's reality; I mean, I am very close to my mother, but when something like that gets in the way... Otherwise, that was an excellent story, and I loved it. It was very well written, and it had an excellent plot. I HOPE to see a sequel, and I hope to see Josh and Jen together again. Sincerely, A sad, yet happy, reader. |