omg, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write a sequel to this story! i'm begging you. it was so good. jen and josh HAVE to get back together! sequel sequel sequel

NONONONONONONONONONONO!

no nono no no no!it cant end this way!make a sequel so she can run back to josh!or better, make an alternate epilogue chapter thingy where she jumps out of the car and runs back into his arms yada yada !

omg! I did not expect this ending. I don't understand why she went along with what her mother wanted. BIG SURPRISE! please write a sequel i want josh and princess to be together!:(:(:(

SHE SAID SHE LOVED HIM! THAT WAS SO GOOD! YAY! OMG THAT WAS SO GOOD!

You must you must you *must* write a sequel, and resolve their relationship! I absolutely adored this story from the first chapter, it made me laugh and groan and even sometimes it made me cry. It was a beautiful ending, but not satisfying. Please consider a sequel!

OMG! i love the last 2 chapters their so good with all the emoiton their great. keep writeing please your so giood at it. write a sequal please it will be great!

There are a few things I wanna say so I think I'm going to start with the most obvious.

Great job on the story! I loved how you captured the change in the characters and made it so obvious unlike some stories where they say the character has changed but you can't see it.

Second, I read some of the reviews for this last chapter before coming to review myself. Like some people said, it's hard to imagine Jen going through with this for her mother's sake but at the same time I can see that the story really did fulfill it's original purpose.

Jen did learn something and she did that through the love of someone else and hopefully she'll always love him. Of course I would have prefered if she stayed with Josh, but you as the author know what is the best ending.

I hope that you do do a sequel but that again is up to what the author thinks is best. Hopefully that if you do do a sequel that they will end up together.

Great job on the story and I can't wait to read some of your other writing!

i would really like it if you did a sequal. i really loved reading this story. i'm a lil dissapointed w/Jen, but i think it's great that you chose to stick to your original plan. in any event, great job.

Yes I recon a Sequel would be good as i didn't want it to end like that...Please a sequel...Ok bye for now hope to see you in either the sequel or a new story meg.

PS I loved this story...

First off...Lemme just say that I was too lazy to sign in...but it doesn't really matter because I think you just know me better as Kristin from AIM whose screen name is LuViNaLiTTLeDoRk.

Well...I'm on vacation right now...so I haven't been able to get to a computer and read the new chapters you've put up. So...today I got to a computer and I read em. And lemme just say...if I wasn;t on vacation without AIM...then you would be getting a mouthful from me about the ending to the story.

Well...actually...I REALLY have to go right now because me and my family are doing stuff...after all...I'm on vacation...visiting the family. But I promise later I'll tell you what I thought later! Next time I get on the computer...it should be soon though!

~*Kristin*~

yay it's finished! i highly suggest you do a sequel cause your story is awesome. i'm a lil disappointed in the end but it's all good. :D good job!

I've read a few of the other reviews on this epilogue, and I totally agree with the reviewer who deemed it highly unlikely that Jen would just do everything for her mom's wishes. Honestly. Jen and Josh had a great plan when they decided to just get married and give the damn trust fund over to the money hungry bitch. And after her Will's comment (I'd send my friend to teach her a lesson..or something like that) I thought that that would snap Jen back to reality. After all, the title is "You're my everything". Jen is josh's everything, and Josh is Jen's everything cuz the Mom and R-something sure as hell ain't!

PLease, please consider re-writing this last chapter and pairing Jen with Josh! PLEASE!

You are a talented writer, and I wish you the best of luck on the rest of your projects.

It's so sad! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL!

I really liked Josh's speech... How he used the (very appropriate) metaphor of a book coming to a close. That was good work.

This ending does feel unfinished, somehow. It feels like Jen's going to be living the rest of her life for her mother's happiness, and that's just not right. She had to snap out of it sometime.

As to whether you should do a sequel... I know from experience how hard it is to say goodbye to characters you've created and grown to love... but it is hard to capture lightning in a bottle twice. I'm finding my sequel much harder to write than the original ever was.

My overall thoughts on "You're My Everything?": Honestly, I thought the plot of the selfish mom a little contrived, at least in this setting. This ending, especially, would have seemed far more realistic in a historical setting, I think. I don't know any moms in 2003 who would actually arrange a marriage for a just-graduated high school student, for money. (And her dad was fine with it too?) And the daughter agrees to it, why? I thought she wanted to go to college and become a therapist. It doesn't seem like that's in mommy's plans either.

Sometimes these characters acted so independently, it almost seemed like they were already in college. That might be a change of setting that could work too.

All in all, though, I liked this story. I think you have writing talent and you created some really memorable characters. With some work, this might make a great novel. Good luck!