Reviews for Heart Disease
Meegwun chapter 1 . 5/27/2003
*blinks* this is... m lord, i think i shall be writing this on my wall. wow. i haven't words to describe this. you are certainly a talented one.
sylph paean chapter 1 . 5/26/2003
whoa! holy profound, batman. that's not sarcasm - i am in awe. you lied to me! your poems do NOT suck at ALL.

The heart’s lie begets a covetous joy

If not for more than a mere heartbeat’s time


And when the heart muscle begins to bleed

Convince yourself that love is all you need

are my favourite parts of this poem. you rock!

jaded but alive chapter 1 . 5/4/2003
i love it, especially the part about how the heart is muscle. the heart is just a muscle, after all...