|Reviews for Heart Disease|
| Meegwun chapter 1 . 5/27/2003
*blinks* this is... m lord, i think i shall be writing this on my wall. wow. i haven't words to describe this. you are certainly a talented one.
| sylph paean chapter 1 . 5/26/2003
whoa! holy profound, batman. that's not sarcasm - i am in awe. you lied to me! your poems do NOT suck at ALL.
The heart’s lie begets a covetous joy
If not for more than a mere heartbeat’s time
And when the heart muscle begins to bleed
Convince yourself that love is all you need
are my favourite parts of this poem. you rock!
| jaded but alive chapter 1 . 5/4/2003
i love it, especially the part about how the heart is muscle. the heart is just a muscle, after all...