Reviews for Empty Dreams
Dominique Diane chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
Everything was great! Just the last sentence didn't rhyme as well as the others :)
rae chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
good job. i know the feeling.
YueDreamer chapter 1 . 11/22/2004
So true! very true! very nicely done! love the idea! _
Lillianna-Rose chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
Aw... that was a really sweet poem. Was that really from a real life situation?
Fu1 chapter 1 . 6/23/2003
This is a great poem, one of the best ones that I've read here. Good job!
kaika switched chapter 1 . 11/13/2002
Great poem. I always like stuff that rhymes. You should write more poetry, it will develop and grow and all that good stuff. Great job.
dancing bohemian chapter 1 . 11/1/2002
Again, read it before, like it still. (You should keep up your poetry. Your eloquence continues to develop, and I think it will help you relieve boredom (and goodness knows that's a problem nowadays) as well as get out your emotions.)
rockeranjl chapter 1 . 8/6/2002
i can relate to this poem all too well _
Sunkisses643 chapter 1 . 8/6/2002
i luved it! Great poem