Everything was great! Just the last sentence didn't rhyme as well as the others :)

good job. i know the feeling.

So true! very true! very nicely done! love the idea! _

Aw... that was a really sweet poem. Was that really from a real life situation?

This is a great poem, one of the best ones that I've read here. Good job!

Great poem. I always like stuff that rhymes. You should write more poetry, it will develop and grow and all that good stuff. Great job.

Again, read it before, like it still. (You should keep up your poetry. Your eloquence continues to develop, and I think it will help you relieve boredom (and goodness knows that's a problem nowadays) as well as get out your emotions.)

i can relate to this poem all too well _

i luved it! Great poem