|Reviews for Immortal|
| method acting chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
Again, lovely job. Again, interesting font choice. Again, I htink you could have added more detail. The flow was off to me for this one. Nice job.
| Nighttime Wanderer chapter 1 . 5/10/2004
I like it, pelase read my story It Will SUrely Come To Pass ((it is about vampires))
| Sara Bickley chapter 1 . 4/7/2004
I like how you use a more "traditional" conception of the vampire - it's a refreshing break from the vampire-as-sexy-hero stuff that's so common nowadays. Your grammar could perhaps use work ("Her teeth is sharp"?), but this is still a nice piece of writing.
| sarmia chapter 1 . 7/31/2003
good job how about trying to go through the good things of being a vampire...a conflicting poem to go with it..maybe cool
r and r me thanx!
| kimoniknai chapter 1 . 7/22/2003
that was truly a great but melancholy peom
| 00 chapter 1 . 2/1/2003
I love vampires! Ahh!
And a very nice poem indeed!
| 89167 chapter 1 . 11/23/2001
Neat poem. Depressed vampires are great!
| Tanzonite Black chapter 1 . 12/18/2000
it has a different twist then what I've seen in a lot a vampire poems, but it's cool.