Reviews for Girl
Kurt Nabokov chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
Sometimes I wish I was someone else... Someone that has never read this poem.

method acting chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
The last two lines of this peice make absolutly no sense. I don't kow if it is simly lack of grammar...In anycase, the duration of the poem, the mean, the thick of things, very nice. Straightfroward, angsty, but obviously heartfelt. Simple, but it only excetuates the feeling. I have read a lot of poems similar to this, and nothing really made it stand out to me. It is heartfelt, but there was no twist. Longer would have been better. Nice job.
Passion chapter 1 . 1/17/2001
it's kinda short..but it still had "power" to it..great job!


PrincessDrusilla chapter 1 . 10/13/2000
Mary-Jo chapter 1 . 10/12/2000
I love depressed girl poems though I tend to write cheesy ones myself.
Cassandra chapter 1 . 10/11/2000
I've felt like that many times. And the poem was almost exactly what i was feeling. I t made me feel not as alone. Thanks