Ok so Hayden didn't save her... But Spider is just as good, plus he found a way for them to get into high city!

When Alys ran out of bullets while fighting the wolves i yelled "pistol whip thr son of the bitch!" But then i paused and said "better yet let Hayden save you!" Then Hayden saved her when I finished reading the chapter... At least I think there is a 99% chance its Hayden... It better be...

How could Alus do such a thing as leaving Hayden behind! They love each other dammit! *sigh* Oh well I'm positive Hayden will catch up to them at some point... I hope...

Noooooooooo! Clyde and Davis cant die! That is not allowed to happen! Why! Whi does life have to br wo cruel! I am going to kill those arrogant low-life spade bastards that live a pathetic excuse pf a life! (i'm probably entirely to into this story... But that just means I'm reading an awesome, amazing, wonderful story!)

YAY! Hayden and Alys are finally together! (?) Right? I'll

Just have to read on. And oh dear god no! Not gunshots. I hope to god that the gunshots were from people performing a civil war re-enactment in their front yard, and not soldiers. Please be, civil war re-enactment! *crosses fingers*

Thrse past few chapters were an an emotional roller coaster ride for me. I laughed, cried, was scared as hell when I read the part where I found out Slap was deteriorating, and screamed at my computer when i got mad at either Hayden or Alys. And I did my happy dance when Davis' fanily made up. This story is just too good! .

Oh God yes Slap is alive. Thank you thank you thank you thank you! I could kiss you right now. The pure joy i feel right now is so... So beautiful! I cant describe how happy you have made me

Oh god I hate you so much, you killed off slap! How could you be so heartless. Seriously though, I just finished chapter 18 and I can't wait to read the rest. I love you for this amazing story, but at the same time I hate you for killing slap. From the second he appeared in your story I grew attached to him. Awesome story, I cant wait to finish it!

cool story read this

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Sorry I'm reviewing on anon it's because the login is being bootsy. Anyway I just wanted to say that I love this story. I'm sad that it would probably never be finished or something like that. Im also sadden that I won't know the ending. The story really is amazing. It's like a mixture of sci-fi and fantasy. I love the characters and I dislike some of them like Ellie and Ary and the mysterious Leader only because they're like villains. So yeah.

this has been one of the greatest stories i've ever read. i really hope you'll stick to ur word and post the second version, i really would like to know how this turns out )

hayden's a magician of some sort? he can bring dead things back to life?

this is getting good! (well it was already good anweiss..)

wow is inbetween trying to commit suicide (his bipolar tho, not intentionally) Flip seems to be neglecting Slap...am I rite? Or is Slap just starting to re-evaluate the greater meaning of lyfe?

Spades rock! (lol)

hehehehehe is all i can say :)

brilliant!

i this chapter! so alys has become the white rabbit for the night! uh-oh. i have a feeling these "clubs" are going to have raging hard-ons by the end of thw show, lol.

But then that'd probably make them more eagar to "talk" to her.

D

how exactly is asking for money warrant being shoved up against the wall and groped? lol

and i bet u big time the spade was lying...or then maybe not.