omgoodness, i didn't notice this update! O_O and itz been so long...i swear i didn't see it before when i checked... chapter, (like all ur other ones ) and this one builds up for the next stuff to come...how are they gonna pull this off? how are YOU going to write this next part? one of the reasons why i'd never be able to write is because i don't see anyway out of these situations..except to kill off the character.. S and i'm still dying from the anticipation. *help me!* there's just soo much stuff that i would like to know that i get exasperated thinking about it...yes, i'm an extreme person...but i have to say that this is such an awesome story, and that i can't wait for the next part. and thanks for the nice comment. made me happy times a million. hope u can update soon. ~su

yo, this is awesome, and ive only just begun. I live in NYC and i think this would make a greeat movie. are you going to film school? cause you should be. Try SVA, look it up. its the shit!

I love this story. I thought it was going to be stupid. But I gave it a try and now I'm addicted. I can't wait until the next chapter. Keep up the good work! Later mate.

Hello _ I just read this whole thing over a road trip i took to canada. Wow does it take alot of paper to print it all, but it was so worth it! I love the characters and the story line intrigues(sp?) me. I always love a good story. I am sry that i didn't get to review every chappy but I was determined to write u for this one! Keep up the fine work and dont keep me hanging for the play! I'll review again with the next chapter. :)

P.S. Does Alys still have her stitches because im really sure they can be taken out now. I had a deep cut like that once and i had to keep the stitches in for only 2 weeks but where hers are situated i'd give her 3 weeks. Just pondering... :P

I'm such a fan of irony, if I were Alys, I'd get them to write the play based on a bit of my life. Or maybe even to do a play of Alice in Wonderland, supposing in your 'Wonderland' they don't have it already? Oh, I'm curious now. Extremely curious. :D

I would write more, but like you I have the whole nauseous feeling. I think drink-reviewing is not for the faint-hearted, bleurgh.

Love the story lots. Tons and tons and tons! Such a good read! You *must* update soon! I'll probably end up emailing you a bigger review/squee hybrid, once I'm not feeling like my stomach is trying to escape via my throat. Urgh. Sorry for the imagery.

*Loffs*

Hey, long time no see! I'm so glad you finally updated, but of course I finish each chapter craving more. At least we get to see some old familiar faces again. And Rayna...I love him, I really do. I wonder if he's perceptive enough to see through Alys' charade; she can't keep it up forever, can she?

Anyway, hope you feel better, and have a good holiday. I look forward for more chapters.

~Zell

I must say that i'm quite impressed with the new addition to you know that they actually came out recently with a 'new version' of Alice in Wonderland? Alice is now Alyss and it's actaully pretty good. not as complex and fantastic as this but good none the less. it's called 'The Looking Glass Wars' by Frank , keep with the up-dates, the sooner the better.

YOU LIVE!

Finally! What is this? The first new chapter since August? It is, isnt it? You lazy little bum! It is a good chapter though, just don't wait another four months to write another, please.

Thank you! You're back! woohoo!

beautiful chapter, as always!

Damn... How the hell do you keep spitting out stuff like this? It's totally awesome- your characters alone leave absolutely NOTHING to be desired. They're so completely real... Arg. It makes me crazy! :) Anyways, I love that Slap and Spider are back in the picture- now all I have to do is bide my time until Hayden pops his sexy little self back in. _ woot. I can't wait~! Excellent work, as always.

~Em.

P.S. Thanks a million for the plug in your author's note! It really means alot to me:)

thank god you're back.

WOW! Great chapter! Slap is back! YES! I AM SOO HAPPY! YEAH! And he's a macho man now! Wow! He seems more confident now. Spider is back too! Aw! He didn't get to see Fallon tho! o! Will Hayden be in the next chapter? He is so cool, I miss him! I AM SOO GLAD YOU UPDATED! Please update soon!

PLEEASEE, please, please update! sonn! I'm dying over here with curiousity!

hey, i just started reading your story about 3 days ago, and i can't believe how much i love it! i sat in front of my computer for so many hours and just read, and my family was wondering why i was spending so much time on the computer (not that i don't always P). your story is so interesting! there isn't too many stories on this site that have such a great storyline as yours. i love your characters, and i love how each of them have their own distinct personality. i'm REALLY curious to what's going to happen...i guess i actually want to know ellia's side of the story, cuz i'm still wondering why she sacrificed her family for this whole war thingymabob..and hayden! i'm wondering what is going to happen to him and Alys, or just HIM in general since he's all burnt up! ( (sometimes i really love Alys, and sometimes i just get really disappointed in her, like that time she shot Hayden and made him burn. i was like "gasp!" and then i was sad times a million because i can almost feel the betrayal (i get a little TOO into stories lol). and i remember you wrote somewhere that Alys isn't the sharpest tack in the box, and itz so true. i sometimes want to yell at her...but i like how your characters have flaws, itz just that Alys has a completely different personality than me, so i guess i don't agree with some of her thoughts/behavior..i'm surprised that you don't have as much reviews as some other stories, cuz i find yours much better than the other ones...(and i'm not exaggerating)anyways, i could go on forever and talk about all of my thots on this story, but i'm sure you wouldn't want me wasting your time. P just PLEASE update soon or else i might just die from the anticipation! lol. good luck! ~su