Great story, took me a whil to understand.

very scary, and gory, and freaky, and damn i'm prolly gonna have nightmares now.

Great story, realy gory, got realy confusing at some points going back and forth from the execution to hell and back again, but i figuired it out, realy great gorry stuff, u should try to make a story complelty like that, example: some guy being engulfed in flames and u would write like a whole page or this guy getting killed in a fire, enjoyed the story, it inspired me to make something similar.

This story was kinda cool, I say.

Ah, gore at its most elegant. You twisted mind has created a master piece my friend. Do continue writing, it's time well spent. I particularly like the ending of this one.