|Reviews for The death of my beloved cellphone.|
| pneumothorax chapter 1 . 4/26/2004
Not prose, not poem. Hardly entertaining to read as it had no rythmn. Whilst it may have been entertaining to write, it was certainly not to write.
| XxDragon Princess NikkixX chapter 1 . 10/4/2003
Lmao! Short and funny. Your poor cell phone *shakes head* *reaches over and grips your shoulder* it will be okay, just hang in there. lol! J/k. This was a different but good poem. Nicely done!
| Avalon's Guardian chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
How did it die? I mean it's a inanimate object. anyways that was kinda funny I liked it!
Avalon's Guardian AKA Shadow in the Flames
| Mockingbirdflyaway chapter 1 . 8/2/2003
sorta like when my computer crashed...
| Lappy chapter 1 . 7/29/2003
That reminds me of my sister when she dropped her cell phone in the toilet... it never rang again. *sobs* that *sniffle* poem w-w-was *sniffle * so sad, yet b-beautiful! *breaks down crying*
| D'Artagnan chapter 1 . 4/13/2003
LOL! That was so cute.
You love the Weasley twins too? I wanna shag em.
| sirius1 chapter 1 . 2/5/2003
I think that is the funniest thing i have ever read... I'm crying i am actually crying!
| Lil Loki Puck Not signed in chapter 1 . 11/13/2002
aaw. hehe, that's kind of cute
| LadyLaura020 chapter 1 . 10/16/2002
aww i'll mourn w/ya for ur cell :::mourns::: ok i kinda like this keep up w/da good work!
| chips challenge chapter 1 . 10/15/2002
I have yet to get a cell phone, but that poem(?) reminds me of how I felt when my lap top was away at the shop for almost two months. I really missed it.
| Amber Evans Potter chapter 1 . 10/1/2002
*snorts in laughter* That was certainly an interesting . . . piece.
| Pink Monkey Eater chapter 1 . 9/5/2002
LOL. That was funny. I'm sorry about your cell phone. I have, like, six extra one's if you want one. J/K. I think my Grandma would kill me if i gave away my old cell's. Anywhoo, that was really cute.
| Deity chapter 1 . 8/21/2002
*snort* That was interesting!
| Danae6 chapter 1 . 8/13/2002
This is good. Just a suggestion: don't reveal until the end that it's your cell phone you are mourning. It gives it a bit of a twist.
| Tiefling chapter 1 . 8/13/2002
Heh heh. Just remember that your little darling was probably giving you brain cancer.