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Reviews for
Tear
giggles for boys
chapter 1 .
1/29/2003
awesome! i liked the first line, "liquid gem so clear"
Curtis J. Perry
chapter 1 .
8/14/2002
creative; original. I wasn't expecting that. Please don't do all those 'haiku police' this and that.