|Reviews for Spare Change About The Universe|
| E. Gao chapter 1 . 3/1/2003
oh my. the math and art
and mathandart are beautifully
set against the shadow of the
church, and I feel as if I
could never hate math if only
it turned out every time like
'one-oh-eight' and then the
world would be always correct
in its constant birthing.
| Phantom of Whispers chapter 1 . 11/19/2002
T.S. Eliot, I am comparing you to. You have an amazing talent, I really enjoy the oddness of your poems.
| Aviendha19 chapter 1 . 8/17/2002
this is an awesome poem, youre an awesome poet! i love all of it, its so good. and, im wordless. just, thank you
| unexpected source chapter 1 . 8/16/2002
mathematic and stylish and soupy
and the structure is extremely intersting, as always.
i like it, alot alot alot
| Piper Cub chapter 1 . 8/16/2002
Wonderful poem! :) But it's also kind of sad. I too sometimes wonder why we spend precious time piddling over details when there's a whole world out there.
I've also had many dreams like this, with the prosaic and the profound rubbing elbows together.
| Jade6 chapter 1 . 8/15/2002
You used a lot of shadow imagery in this piece and I liked it... it helped add to the overall effect of your poem! Great work!
| JoyGreenLeaf chapter 1 . 8/15/2002
Oooooo... I like it. I like it a lot. It's very... I dunno. I just like it.