Reviews for Spare Change About The Universe
E. Gao chapter 1 . 3/1/2003
oh my. the math and art

and mathandart are beautifully

set against the shadow of the

church, and I feel as if I

could never hate math if only

it turned out every time like

'one-oh-eight' and then the

world would be always correct

in its constant birthing.

Phantom of Whispers chapter 1 . 11/19/2002
T.S. Eliot, I am comparing you to. You have an amazing talent, I really enjoy the oddness of your poems.

Aviendha19 chapter 1 . 8/17/2002
this is an awesome poem, youre an awesome poet! i love all of it, its so good. and, im wordless. just, thank you
unexpected source chapter 1 . 8/16/2002
mathematic and stylish and soupy

and the structure is extremely intersting, as always.

i like it, alot alot alot

Piper Cub chapter 1 . 8/16/2002
Wonderful poem! :) But it's also kind of sad. I too sometimes wonder why we spend precious time piddling over details when there's a whole world out there.

I've also had many dreams like this, with the prosaic and the profound rubbing elbows together.
Jade6 chapter 1 . 8/15/2002
You used a lot of shadow imagery in this piece and I liked it... it helped add to the overall effect of your poem! Great work!

JoyGreenLeaf chapter 1 . 8/15/2002
Oooooo... I like it. I like it a lot. It's very... I dunno. I just like it.